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From deer to motorbikes 昨天在邻村是农房开门的日节的。 你从农房到农房去看,能看见刍豢。有个农房牧猪,有个牧家鸭, 有个羊,有个鹿, 有个牧山羊,有个种橄榄油,蜜, 葡萄酒, 乳酪等等 。你能品尝也买它他么的食品。 我们先去看鹿农房。在那里到了也看见一辆古玩的摩托车。它的状况不错, 它由贱卖了, 也我们买了它! 一辆1956年摩托车啊!! 我恨不得赏它! Yesterday, in the neighbouring villages, it was "open-farm" day. You go from farm to farm, and can look at the livestock. Some farms breed pigs, some breed ducks, some sheep, some deer, some goats, some produce olive oil, honey, wine, cheese etc. You can taste their produce and buy it. First, we went to visit the deer farm. Arrived there, we saw an antique motorbike. Its condition was not bad, and it was on sale, so we bought it! A 1956 motorbike! I can't wait to enjoy it!

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From deer to motorbikes

昨天在邻村是农房开门的日节的。 (昨天是邻村农房开门的节日)。
你从农房到农房去看,(你从农房一间一间地看去),能看见刍豢(牲畜)。有个农房牧猪,(有养猪的农房)有个牧家鸭,(有养鸭的) 有个羊,(有羊)有个鹿,(有鹿) 有个牧山羊,(还有山羊)。有个种橄榄油,(另外还有做橄榄油的 because the previous ones are animals,and oliver oli and the later ones are plants, it's different genre, so it's better to add an 另外)蜜,(酿蜜的) 葡萄酒,(酿葡萄酒的) 乳酪(做奶酪的)等等 。你能品尝也买它他么的食品。(你可以品尝也可以买他们的食品 )
我们先去看鹿农房。(首先我们去参观了养鹿农场)在那里到了也看见一辆古玩的摩托车。(到了那里,我们看到一辆古着的摩托车,there are many ways to translate antique in Chinese,so the other corrections are alright)它的状况不错,(车况还不差"车况“means the condition of the motobike) 它由贱卖了,(因为卖得很便宜) 也我们买了它! (我们就把它买下了。)
一辆1956年(产的)摩托车啊!!
我恨不得赏它! 我等不及要好好玩玩儿了。

Yesterday, in the neighbouring villages, it was "open-farm" day.
You go from farm to farm, and can look at the livestock. Some farms breed pigs, some breed ducks, some sheep, some deer, some goats, some produce olive oil, honey, wine, cheese etc.
You can taste their produce and buy it. First, we went to visit the deer farm. Arrived there, we saw an antique motorbike. Its condition was not bad, and it was on sale, so we bought it! A 1956 motorbike! I can't wait to enjoy it!

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昨天是鄰近村莊的農場開放日,我們可以挨家逐戶的看看各個農場所豢養的牲畜。有些農戶養豬,有些農戶養鴨,也有一些農戶養綿羊、鹿、山羊等等。又有人賣橄欖油、蜂蜜、葡萄酒、乳酪等等農產品。這些農產品不但可以現場品嘗,也可以買回家慢慢享用。

當天我們先去了一家養鹿場,而我在那裡瞥見一輛中古的摩托車,看它狀況還不錯,定價也便宜,於是我就毫不猶豫的把它買下來了!這是1956年生產的老骨董,我恨不得馬上騎上它出去兜兜風!

中古:使用過的,舊品,但非特指二手。

 

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From deer to motorbikes

昨天在邻村是农房开门的日节的。 昨天是邻村的农房开门的节日。

(你从农房到农房去看,)你挨着农房一家一家看,能看见(刍豢)许多牲畜。有(个)的农房(牧)养猪,有的(牧)养家鸭, (有个羊,有个鹿, 有个牧山羊,有个种橄榄油,蜜, 葡萄酒, 乳酪等等 。你能品尝也买它他么的食品。)有的养羊、鹿、蜜蜂,还有的种橄榄、葡萄,也有酿酒,做乳酪等  。 你既能品尝,也能买他们的食品  。  

我们先去看养鹿的农房。到了那里我们看见一辆很旧的摩托车。(它的状况不错)但它的条件并不是很差,(它由贱卖了, 也我们买了它!) 因为它价格比较低,所以我们买了它!
这是一辆1956年摩托车啊!!
(我恨不得赏它!) 我恨不得马上骑它!

Yesterday, in the neighbouring villages, it was "open-farm" day.
You go from farm to farm, and can look at the livestock. Some farms breed pigs, some breed ducks, some sheep, some deer, some goats, some produce olive oil, honey, wine, cheese etc.
You can taste their produce and buy it. First, we went to visit the deer farm. Arrived there, we saw an antique motorbike. Its condition was not bad, and it was on sale, so we bought it! A 1956 motorbike! I can't wait to enjoy it!

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