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My change I have changed a lot since I moved to this new school this term. I used to spend a lot of time playing computer with my friends.But now I don't time anymore,because I have to study.I used to be quiet and I have few friends,but I am outgoing now,I have a lot of friends and I often go shopping with them. I used to don't interested in studying and my grade was bad.It is too hard for me to understand what the teacher said.And is't difficult for me to get pronunciation right.So I decide to listening to tapes and study more hard.But now I study hard and I got good grade this term.My teacher is impressed and my parents is pound to me. People sure change.

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Well written. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors.
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My Change

 

I have changed a lot since I moved to this new school this term.
I used to spend a lot of time playing computer with my friends. But now I don't have time anymore, because I have to study. I used to be quiet, and I had few friends, but I am outgoing now. I have a lot of friends, and I often go shopping with them.
I used to I was not interested in studying back then, so my grades were bad. It was too hard for me to understand what the teacher said. And it isn’t difficult for me to get pronunciation right. So I decided to listening to tapes and study more harder. But now I studied hard, and I got good grades this term. My teacher is impressed, and my parents are proud of me.
People sure change.

 

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