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Beautiful words. I could feel the feeling. Happy National Day.
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Wait till that day -- 1
Never thought, we could also come across again,
All the words disappeared suddenly,
The more we wanted to hide ,the more embarrassed embarrasments between us.
Still like the same tea,
Sat on the roof and watched the moon together,
The time think we could change,
Still couldn't say that word. (I don't understand this sentence.)
Perhaps only wait till that day,
We could desperately
Run back to each other.
Perhaps only wait till that day,
we could hold each other tightly
with no more distracting thoughts.
When the day come, we need no word.
Hand in hand, enjoy the most splendid
and the last view landscape of the world.
Wait till that day -- 1
Never thought ,we could also come across,
All the words disappeared suddenly,
The more we want to hide ,the more embarrassed between us. Gently ask ,you all right?
Still like the same tea,
Sat on the roof and watched the moon together,
The time think we could change,
Still couldn't say that word.
Perhaps only wait till that day,
We could desperately
Run back to each other.
Perhaps only wait till that day,
we could hold each other tight
with no more distracting thoughts.
When the day come, we need no word.
Hand in hand enjoy the most splendid
the last view of the world.
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