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Dance course
我跟男朋友上舞(舞蹈)课了!
通常在欧洲男人不喜欢上舞(舞蹈)课, 所以我需要说服我的爱人。我们要学莎莎舞跟摇滚舞。
莎莎舞来自南美的古巴,下面的链接说明莎莎舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
摇滚舞来自美国的-十九世纪五十年代, 下面的链接说明摇滚舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
舞(舞蹈)课的时候我们多么开心!!
My boyfriend and I are going to dance class!
Usually, in Europe, men don't like to go to a dance course, therefore I needed to persuade my boyfriend. We're going to learn Salsa and Rock and Roll.
Salsa comes from South America's Cuba, following is a link that shows salsa dancing:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
Rock and Roll comes from America's 1950s, following is a link that shows Rock dance: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
At dancing class we have so much fun!
Wow~~it's the first time I heard about Rock&Roll dance;it must be fantastic! I only know Rock&Roll as a music type before and I'm really into some bands like Radiohead...
Dance course
我跟男朋友上舞课了!
通常在欧洲男人不喜欢上舞课, 所以我需要说服我的爱人。我们要学莎莎舞跟摇滚舞。
莎莎舞来自南美的古巴,下面的链接说明莎莎舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
摇滚舞来自美国的-十九世纪五十年代, 下面的链接说明摇滚舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
舞课的时候我们多么开心!!
My boyfriend and I are going to dance class! 我要和男朋友去上舞蹈课了!(are going to 表示sth will happen。而中文中的”了“表示sth ”has happened“。所以,这里是个小错误。)
Usually, in Europe, men don't like to go to a dance course, therefore I needed to persuade my boyfriend. We're going to learn(are going to learn 可以说”打算学“---plan to learn) Salsa and Rock and Roll.
Salsa comes from South America's Cuba, following is a link that shows salsa dancing:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
Rock and Roll comes from(”来自“不是很恰当,it seems you have passed the through the history and to learn this dance at that time. you can say "起源于") America's 1950s, following is a link that shows Rock dance: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
At dancing class we have so much fun!舞蹈课给我们带来了很多乐趣。
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Your chinese is fairly well, and you can use a lot of advanced words and sentence patterns. This is extraordinary. Keep on moving!
Dance course
我跟男朋友上舞课舞蹈课了!
通常在欧洲男人在欧洲,男人通常不喜欢上舞课舞蹈课, 所以我需要说服我的爱人。我们要学莎莎舞跟摇滚舞。
莎莎舞来自南美的古巴,下面的链接说明介绍了莎莎舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
摇滚舞来自美国的-十九世纪五十年代, 下面的链接说明介绍了摇滚舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
舞课上舞蹈课的时候我们多么开心!!
My boyfriend and I are going to dance class!
Usually, in Europe, men don't like to go to a dance course, therefore I needed to persuade my boyfriend. We're going to learn Salsa and Rock and Roll.
Salsa comes from South America's Cuba, following is a link that shows salsa dancing:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
Rock and Roll comes from America's 1950s, following is a link that shows Rock dance: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
At dancing class we have so much fun!
Dance course
我跟男朋友上舞蹈课了!
通常在欧洲,男人不喜欢上舞蹈课, 但是所以我需要说服我的爱人。我们要学莎莎舞跟摇滚舞。
莎莎舞来自南美的古巴,下面的链接说明莎莎舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
摇滚舞来自美国的-十九世纪五十年代, 下面的链接说明摇滚舞:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
在舞蹈课上,的时候我们是多么开心啊!!
My boyfriend and I are going to dance class!
Usually, in Europe, men don't like to go to a dance course, therefore I needed to persuade my boyfriend. We're going to learn Salsa and Rock and Roll.
Salsa comes from South America's Cuba, following is a link that shows salsa dancing:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1M3amNpmsks&feature=related
Rock and Roll comes from America's 1950s, following is a link that shows Rock dance: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y3U4mFO2xxs
At dancing class we have so much fun!
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