Good entry. Just a few comments to help you out. Remember to capitalize the first letter of every sentence and the personal pronoun "I." (You probably know this, but I thought I would say so, just in case). "I have been thinking about my life many many times." - Since "thinking" is an ongoing act, you don't say "many many times." Instead, say "I have been thinking about my life more and more, or a lot, or quite a bit." The last sentence is a bit confusing. I'm not sure exactly what you are trying to say here. I have an idea, but am not sure. Good job, though. Keep up the good work! 祝你好运！