First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi everybody,My name's Ryan is Cantonese opera actor,I'm from Guangzhou city in China~ I very enjoy studding and hope learning English well,Thanks a lot each a

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi everybody,My name's Ryan is Cantonese opera actor,I'm from Guangzhou city in China~ I very enjoy studding and hope learning English well,Thanks a lot each ather teacher make me can speaking good~

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi everybody,My name's Ryan is Cantonese opera actor,I'm from Guangzhou city in China~ I very enjoy studding and hope learning English well,Thanks a lot each ather teacher make me can speaking good~

Hi Ryan! Welcome to italki!

Try: My name is Ryan. I'm a Cantonese opera actor and I'm from Guangzhou, a city in China. I very much enjoy studying and hope to learn English well.

I'm not sure what your main idea is in the last sentence!
Cheers!

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