First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a university student in grade two. I'm twenty years old. I live in Shanxi Province, Jjinzhong City. I like to watch movies and I like swimming. I'm outgoing, I like reading and cooking. I like books and a variety of food. My major is Teaching Chinese as a Foreign Language. I want to learn English. I want to become a qualified teacher of Chinese as a Foreign Languageso I want to learn English well. Can you help me? if you can, please contact me. Thank you.

Put a space after the punctuation mark (period [.], comma [,]). Don't forget the question mak (?) at the end of question sentences.

The first word in sentences or proper nouns (the name of a person, place or thing) starts with a capital letter. In your writing, I assume that Chinese as a Foreign Language is a formal job title.

In your writing, the words "and" and "so" serve to separate the clauses so a comma is not needed.