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i hate a man A stupid man talk with me today.he said bad words to me .He hurt me ,so i hate him .I hope bad men and bad women didn't add me please,then I will thank you very much.

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the title sounds like u hate every man....i know u didnt mean it to everyone... ;P
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Unfortunately there are many people here who hurt, say bad words and lie, but don't pay attention. There are also many good people here...))))))))
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i hate a man

A stupid man talk with me today.he said bad words to me .He hurt me ,so i hate him .I hope bad men and bad women didn't add me please,then I will thank you very much.

Corrected entry -

There was a stupid man that talk to me today and he said some bad words.  It hurts my feelings so I hated him.  I'm hoping that this bad men and women will not add me or include me and I will appreciate it very much.  Thank you.

The words you used with me and to me is a repetition.  If you put a period after your sentence please add two spaces after the period and the first letter should be capitalized.  And add one space after comma in your sentence.  I add the word feelings because I'm pretty sure that he hurts your feelings unless he punch you?  Just kidding to make you smile :-).  I use some words referring to present and past tense.  

Take care and have a nice day.

 

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All right ,I cannot say that in English,so..."何以报德?以直抱怨,以德报德。"You'd better forget it and do as you own.Being happy is the most important.If you see that man again next time,you may give a smile to him and say"good morning".I'm sure he will be sorry of what he did to you,haha.

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