A dream
The smell of wheat fulled of my nose,a bit sweat.And the sunshine skipped over the window and fell on the floor.
"We will visit Mrs.Chen later."
I smiled,pondering whether need I tell my grandma my dream yeasterday.
Mrs.Chen stood in front of her house,waiting for us as usual.What I needed to do only was just sitting beside them and listening to their chatting obediently.The afternoons in my childhood like that must be my best memories.
The hoilday came to end.Tingzi called me to a amusement park.We played all day.After all,we would graduate soon and occations would be rare when we could paly like that togather.
Tingzi was depressed recently but she relaxed to enjory all that day.On the way back home,the sycamore trees stood beside the road quietly and the leaves sang loudly in the windy.
"My parents have divorced.........."she said.
I could just stayed there with my mouth open and have no idea to comfort her.
"Come on,Cathy.Let's go to Mrs.Chen's."said my grandma with a big smile.
But that day Mrs.Chen didn't wander in front of her house as she did before.
She sat in her old rocking chair,seemed she was sleeping,but without breath.
Tears of my grandma fell on the foor and broke into pieces.
In my dream,Mrs.Chen embraced me in her rocking chair and said"Oh,you dreamed a butterfly breaking a cocoon!So you want to fly ,like a butterfly ,freely?All right ,just do that."
I didn't konw how did she konw my dream that night.
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It was a wheat fragrance waft of season again.
Tingzi simled to us happily."I figured it out.Life is go on!"
Grandma and I went to Mrs.Chen's grave.Grandma didn't cry that time.She said that Mrs.Chen told her to be strong for her in her dream,overcome any difficulty.
I saw a butterfly fiying in my sight.
Yeah,maybe she was right.
We just needed to break the cocoons of life and became a beautiful butterfly flying in the sky,freely.
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..I am sorry that my English is not accurate to express what I am thinking.It's my first time to write down a composition on italki.Hope that you will like it.And I will apreciate it if you have some advice to this composition.Thank you.
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