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Orphans I'm a college student in Tokyo and work part-time at a chemist near Yokohama. My job is to input formulas into PC and chemists order medicines for patients. Today when I was working, I heard of someone speaking about patients who seems to live in the home for orphans. I felt sorry by that. But there was another thing making me more sad. The formula I holding was his, and I checked its section of patients. I was shocked because he was 1 old. I thought about him, his parents and his future. I was about to began to cry. I hope that his life will be a wonderful one. I love children and I want a lovely baby in the future, and I decided to keep my health to bring my baby up happily. Thank you for reading!

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Orphans

I'm a college student in Tokyo and work part-time at a chemist near Yokohama.
My job is to input formulas into PC and chemists order medicines for patients.

Today when I was working, I heard of someone speaking about (speaking of)patients who seems(seem) to live in the home (house) for orphans. I felt sorry by that.
But there was another thing making me more sad(sadder). The formula I (was) holding was his, and I checked its section of patients. I was shocked because he was 1 (year) old. I thought about him, his parents and his future. I was about to cry. I hope that his life will be a wonderful one.

I love children and I want a lovely baby in the future. I decided to keep my health(or stay healthy) to bring my baby up happily.

Thank you for reading! すみません、これははじめです。i dont know how to use those marks to make the difference. I hope it can be of little help anyhow. あなたはとても易しいです。:)

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Thank you for your comment! I don't think I'm good or nice...
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u got a kind heart...!!!

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