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我是谁? ................................. please correct me,in English ! :) 你好,我叫穆罕默德 , 你呢? 我学习机械工程, 我是一个二十岁男孩子。 我的汉语不是很好, 我能说阿拉伯语, 英国 , 法语 和 没很多 汉语 。我有一个美女朋友 感谢 阿拉 :) 她教 爱情, 去 是 强, 去 有 希望

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你好,我叫穆罕默德,男性,今年二十歲,我在大學

學習機械工程。我會說阿拉伯語、英語和法語;至於

我的漢語,還不是很好,只會說一點點。我有一個美女

朋友(感謝阿拉!),她教我愛情、堅強、和常懷希望。

 (去是, 去有 => to be…?)

 

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我是谁? ................................. please correct me,in English ! :)

你好,我叫穆罕默德 , 你呢? 我学习机械工程, 我是一个二十岁男孩子(我是一个二十岁的男孩子 or 我二十岁了)。 我的汉语不是很好, 我能说阿拉伯语, 英国 , 法语 和 没很多 汉语(很少的汉语) 。我有一个美女朋友 感谢 阿拉 :) 她教 爱情, 去 是 强, 去 有 希望 (她教会我爱情,去变强,有希望)

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我是谁? ................................. please correct me,in English ! :)

你好,我叫穆罕默德 , 你呢? 我学习(的专业是)机械工程, 我是一个二十岁男孩子。 我的汉语不是很好, 我能说阿拉伯语, 英国 (英语), 法语 和 没很多(一点点) 汉语 。我有一个美(漂亮的)女朋友 感谢 阿拉 :) 她教 爱情, 去 是 强, 去 有 希望 (她教会我知道什么是爱情,怎样更加坚强,并要怀抱希望)

In Chinese, a simple statement also can have six parts, subject, predicate, object, attribute, adverbial modifer and complement.

1、If you want to say "My majority is mechanical porject", your empasis is "mechanical project", you can tranlate it directly --"我的专业是机械工程". If you want to express what I have been doing now, you can say “我在某大学学习机械工程”。

2、Although either "英国" or "英语" is the same English word, but they are different in Chinese. You did well in "阿拉伯语、法语".

3、"我是一个二十岁的男孩子。" It is a very lovely expression, and is fit for your age. But if you tell it in formal situation, for example, you introduce yourself for someone, you can say "我今年二十岁", if it is a written statment, you can write "穆罕穆德, 男,二十岁" .

3、We usually call a beautiful girl "美女", but when we describ a girl, especially it is an attribute, we usually use "漂亮", for example, "那个女孩好漂亮。","她真是个漂亮的女孩。"

4、The same with English, we can say I cannot speak much Chinese, or you can say I can speak a little Chinese. In Chinese, you can say it in positive way--"我会一点儿汉语。", and you can say it in negative sentence --"我会说的汉语不太多。"

5、"She taught me love , how to be strong , and hope". It is a little difficult to express your opinion and emotion accurately. Basically, it must has subjet, predicte and object. love is "爱情", strong is “坚强” and hope is "希望", which verb you should use depends on what you want to say,for instance, what is love, how to operate love, how to concern people around you, and so on

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(猜猜)我是谁? ................................. please correct me,in English ! :)

>>it is just like puzle, you gave us, in chinese, we say“猜"

if you are knocking a door, the people indoor will need to know who you are and decide to open the door or not. And you can say“猜猜看我是谁?", "Try guess who it is". We use double "猜".

We have two option A and B, "猜猜看那个一个对/更好?", try to figure out which one is right/better?

I don't want to guess, please tell me the answer. 我不想猜,请告诉我答案吧。

你好,我叫穆罕默德 , 你呢? 我在学习机械工程专业, 我是一个二十岁男孩子。

when are doing something, we add"在(be)" before doing something.

你现在在干嘛?what are you doing now? 我在上班 I am doing my job. I am on my duty now.

 我的汉语不是很好, 我能说阿拉伯语, 英国 语(英文), 法语 和 没很多 不是很多的/一点点汉语 。

English we say"英语" or "英文", but in the same sentence, we should use only one format. 阿拉伯文、英文、法文、汉文. Additional, "文" is most happened in writing but not the oral.

>>我有一个美漂亮的女朋友 感谢 阿拉 :) 她教 爱情, 去 是 强, 去 有 希望

我有一个真诚的朋友, I have a sincere friend. Adjective, we use"的".

>> I don't understand the blue words.

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我是谁? ................................. please correct me,in English ! :)

你好,我叫穆罕默德 , 你呢? 我学习机械工程, 我是一个二十岁男孩子。 我的汉语不是很好, 我能说阿拉伯语, 英国 , 法语 和 没很多 汉语 。我有一个美女朋友 感谢 阿拉 :) 她教 爱情, 去 是 强, 去 有 希望
Who am i?

Hello,my name is Mohammed that is not the Mohammed,what about yours?I am learning

mechanical engineering,i am twenty years old.My english is not very good,but i can speak Arabic,English,French and a little Chinese.I have a beautiful girlfriend,which thanks Allah.She gives me love,power and hope.(If there has some mistakes,please forgive my english)
Jason 

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