还有两天我就要开始上大学， 但我太累了！

星期一我就要开始上大学了，我会将学习中文！我又既兴奋又紧张！准备上大学太耗神了，太多事需要做，但我都还没准备好，而且我好疲劳（or 累）！但我真的很期待开始上大学的生活， 但我现在只愿希望上大学前的准备工作一切都已经结束。

On Monday I will start university, I will study Chinese! I am both excited and nervous！Getting ready for university is exhausting, so much to do, I'm still not ready and I'm so tired! I'm really looking forward to starting university, but I just wish it was over already!

ps.祝你大学生活愉快 Beth  ^^

还有两天我就要开始上大学， 但我太累了！

星期一我就要开始上大学了，我会学习中文！我又兴奋又紧张！准备上大学太耗神了，(因为有/有)太多事需要做，我还没准备好，而且我好疲劳！我真的期待开始上大学， 但我只愿希望一切都已经结束准备就绪。

On Monday I will start university, I will study Chinese! I am both excited and nervous！Getting ready for university is exhausting, so much to do, I'm still not ready and I'm so tired! I'm really looking forward to starting university, but I just wish it was over already!

我看的糊里糊涂的，无缘无故想上大学，然后一切都结束。。

还有两天我就要开始上大学， 但我太累了！

星期一我就要开始上大学了，我会学习中文！我又兴奋又紧张！准备上大学太耗神了，太多事需要做，我还没准备好，而且我好疲劳！我真的期待开始上大学， 但我只愿一切都已经结束。 祝贺你进入大学！！

On Monday I will start university, I will study Chinese! I am both excited and nervous！Getting ready for university is exhausting, so much to do, I'm still not ready and I'm so tired! I'm really looking forward to starting university, but I just wish it was over already!

你的中文很好，已经没有地方可以修改的了，但是你这是翻译过来的中文，我用我的词帮你写一篇，希望对你有用。

还有两天我就要开始上大学， 但我太累了！

星期一我就要开始上大学了，我将学习中文！我既兴奋又紧张！我有太多东西要做以至于我被忙得精疲力竭但仍然没有准备妥当，好累啊！（不过）我真的很期待开始（我的）大学生活， 我只是希望自己把一切都赶快做完。

a little different. 

1: 我有太多东西要做(i hv so much to do)以至于(so that)我被忙得精疲力竭(it makes me exhausted)但(in chinese, 但 is better, i m don't know in whether use "and" is better than "but" in english)仍然没有准备妥当(still not ready)，好累啊！(i m so tired).

2:（不过）我真的期待开始（我的）大学生活， 我只是希望自己把一切都赶快准备好。
i m not sure what do u means in this sentence, but according ur note, i think this "it" means get ready, am i right? sadly, in chinese, if u write as 我真的期待开始上大学， 但我只愿望一切都已经结束. because, u havn't point out what is "it" means, we will find it in last sentence, so we will think "it" means "university life", i think u won't wish it over, u wish it start, so wirte as this in chinese is better.

预祝你学业有成。

On Monday I will start university, I will study Chinese! I am both excited and nervous！Getting ready for university is exhausting, so much to do, I'm still not ready and I'm so tired! I'm really looking forward to starting university, but I just wish it was over already!