Please help me correct the grammar incorrectnesses of this email.
I've known a lot of infos of your University,in some degrees i want to say i like it.
Actually i still do have further questions.
First,i would like to know how the quality of your student's dorm?
Does it 1 person 1 room or 1 person 1 small apartment?i don't wanna sticking in a tiny space with another nor multiple big-scaled mammals.
So could you give me some pics of your dorm?
Second,i heard the British Master by Course only have 1 year's era.
So in the 1 year's term,will you University support our the University's dorm,or ask us to find the apartments ourselves？
Third,I've seen that outside your University there have a train station.It is the route to the Brighton and Hove,so i would like to know if i want to go to the center of the city,how long would i take,and how many price need me to pay for?Why i ask this because i want to go to the Urban area as frequently as i can.
And how long would it takes if i go to the shore of the "Brighton and Hove" from the train station by that train?Because i want to go to the sea as frequently as i can.
Fourth,about your University's cost per year in the Master by Course.Btw,i don't have the citizenship of UK nor EU.
Fifth,about the living cost in that place.
Sixth,about the scholarship and the stipend to the student.I would like to emphasize that,i am in a situation that i am neither the citizenship of UK nor EU.
If your full time job is to answer the questions of enquirer,i wish you can answer me as exhaustive as you can.
Thank you very much,Madam.
Merci beaucoup.
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Greetings,
I have researched much about your university and while I want to say that I love it, I still have some questions to ask.
1. what type of student dorms do you offer? How large are they in square feet? Also, are there any pictures of the dorms located online? If so, could you send me the link? How much does it cost to live in the dorms? (这是你的第五问题）
2. I read that the British Master's program will only take a year. After the year, will the University still allow me to live in the dorms or will I be asked to find an apartment as soon as i finish the program?
3. I've seen that there is a train station outside of the University. How long does it take to travel from the university to the center of the city and how much does this cost? Also, if I go to the shore of "Brighton and Hove" how long would this trip take and how much would it cost?
4.What is the tuition cost for your unuiversity per year in the Master's program. I don't have citizenship of UK or EU.
5. Can you describe the type of steiped avaible to international students that are not EU or UK citizens?
If your full time job is to answer the questions of enquirer,i wish you can answer me as exhaustive as you can. If its not, then please give me as much as your body can type. (你不应该说这个不过你选自）
Thank you very much!
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OMG,that English sentence is awesome.
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i've had sent it.
but you can correct it without worried about time.
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You mean 'When will you need this?'.
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when you will need this?
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