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About me My name's Ann. I'm 24. I'm from St. Petersburg, Russia.

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Hi Ann

 

If I were to simply correct your three sentences as they currently stand, the answer would be:

 

My name is Ann. I am 24 years old. I am from St Petersburg, Russia.

 

A more natural way of saying this though, would simply be to say:

 

My name is Ann. I am 24 years old and am from St Petersburg, Russia.

 

Ideally, this is what should be used on a conversational basis as it has a better flow to it. However, it is still perfectly correct to use the first option I gave you, if you would so prefer....

 

Remember that the most important aspect when one is introducing oneself, is to simply present oneself with confidence. Thus if you feel most comfortable using 3 simple sentences, feel free to do so :) If,however, you are feeling slightly more adventurous, an easy option is to make use of the basic conjunction "and". This is because this conjunction can be used without having to change the essential structure of either of the two original sentences.

 

I hope this helps!

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Hi Ann

 

If I were to simply correct your three sentences as they currently stand, the answer would be:

 

My name is Ann. I am 24 years old. I am from St Petersburg, Russia.

 

A more natural way of saying this though, would simply be to say:

 

My name is Ann. I am 24 years old and am from St Petersburg, Russia.

 

Ideally, this is what should be used on a conversational basis as it has a better flow to it. However, it is still perfectly correct to use the first option I gave you, if you would so prefer....Remember that the most important aspect when one is introducing oneself, is to simply present oneself with confidence. Thus if you feel most comfortable using 3 simple sentences, feel free to do so :) If,however, you are feeling slightly more adventurous, an easy option is to make use of the basic conjunction "and". This is because this conjunction can be used without having to change the essential structure of either of the two original sentences.

 

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About me

My name's Ann. I'm 24. I'm from St. Petersburg, Russia. - In English this is called choppy sentence but you can make this three sentences into one. By simply saying like this.

 

My name is Ann, 24 years old from from St. Petersburg, Russia.

 

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About me

My name is Ann. I'm 24. I'm from St. Petersburg, Russia.

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About me

My name is Ann. I'm 24. I'm from St. Petersburg, Russia.

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