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A brief introduce of ShangHai Now, I live in one of the biggest city of china, ShangHai.In my opinion, living in shanghai is very pain, for shanghai is a stram city, and everyone must spend one hour or more to go to work or go home. More and more people like to work and live in shanghai because it has more chance and fairness than other cities of china.. If you visit shanghai, there are many senerys to see, such as the pearl of onient, the Yupark; NanJing walking street Etc.

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A brief introduction to Shanghai

Now, I live in one of the biggest cities in China, Shanghai.In my opinion, living in Shanghai is very painful, for Shanghai is a huge city, and everyone must spend an hour or more to go to work or go home.

More and more people like to work and live in Shanghai because it has more opportunities and fairness than other cities of China..

If you visit Shanghai, there are many sights to see, such as the pearl of the Orient, the Yupark; Nanjing walking street Etc.

 

(We normally anglicise the city name to "Shanghai" even if it's two words in the original)

opportunity and chance are similar words, opportunity is more related to things like jobs ("job opportunities" is a common tagline).

I wasn't sure if "The Pearl of the Orient" was the name of a thing or not. If it's just a compliment, "pearl" doesn't need a capital letter.

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