3 days offline. - 20110909
A friend visited me since Wednesday. We had dinner together after I came back from work in the past two days. We hanged out until deep night. I didn't have enough time to switch on my computer and keep my English study plan. It was a pity.
We will go to the cinema today. I have to be offline for one more day.
I slept for only 4 hours last night. I hope we can come back early today.
O(∩_∩)O~ The three-day Mid-autumn Day Festival holiday is coming. I will have a nice time.
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3 days offline. - 20110909
A friend visited [has been visiting] me since Wednesday. [The past two days], We had dinner together after I came back from work in the past two days. We [hung] hanged out until [late] deep night. I didn't have enough time to switch on my computer and keep [with] my English study plan. It was a pity.
We will go to the cinema** today. I have to be offline for one more day.
I slept for only 4 hours last night. I hope we can come back early today.
O(∩_∩)O~ The three-day Mid-autumn Day Festival holiday is coming. I will have a nice time.
** I would say "the movies" though "the cinema" isn't wrong. These corrections in general are based on modern American English.
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