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Business Topic 2 Suoppose: I were the managing Director of a manufacturing company. My factory will soon have a visit from health and safety inspectors. I would write an E-mail as follows. Dear Colleague, I'd like to inform you that there will be a visit from health and safety inspectors on wednesday, 8 september from 10am-17pm. If they find something wrong with health and safety in our company and you'll be got punishment. So, you'd better clean your department with your staff and prevent bad things happening during their inspection. Thank you !

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By the way: Dates are always written like

2nd of November

3rd of December

or 28th of September

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Business Topic 2

 

Suoppose: I were the managing Director of a manufacturing company. My factory will soon have a visit from health and safety inspectors. I would write an E-mail as follows.

Dear Colleague,

I'd like to inform you that there will be a visit from health and safety inspectors on wednesday, 8 september from 10am- 5pm. If they find something wrong with health and safety in our company and you'll be got punishment. So, you'd better clean your department with your staff and prevent bad things happening during their inspection.

Thank you !

 

Wow this email would be really frightening to me :P

I would write:

 

 Dear all!

 

I'd like to inform you that there will be a visit from health and safety inspectors on wednesday, 8 september from 10am- 5pm. This inspection is very important to our company, so please make sure that your desk is cleaned up and be careful with you answers you give to the inspector.

If you have any questions don’t hesitate to contact me.

Thank you!

Explanation:

 

Punishment: You don’t punish your employees unsless they’ve stolen something. I don’t know how things are going in chinese offices, but I am fairly sure that there are no punishments going on ^^ Only a criminals get punished ;)

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of course not . Undergraduate..
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Do you mind if I ask you what is your university degree?
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Your email has the subtlety of a sledgehammer, 339831919!! I'd be surprised if you had any employees left at all after sending them that message :)))

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