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My favorite pets
Today I would like to say something about my favorite pets. I like all kinds of animals; however, dogs are my favorite. I have three dogs, and all of them have names. I don't regard them only as animals, because sometimes I talk to them (no comma needed here because there is only one subject) and tell them off when they have made mistakes. They are as naughty as kids, and they truly make my life colorful. Because of them, I feel responsible. I need to take care of them and feed them on time.
I know that dogs can’t live as long as humans, but because of this I cherish every minutes that I spends with them. Furthermore, dogs that are protected by their owners will no longer fool around on the street, and they will not be hit to death just for stealing a piece of bread. So if you have a dog, no matter what the reason is, do not abandon him at will. For the reason that You are the whole world for them, if they lose you they lose their home.
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