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Journal for today Hello, this is my first journal entry in this site. Actually i don't have any idea to write about when we are talking about writing a journal. As i said, this is my first journal in this site, so it is not my very first journal. I had been asked to write journals by my English's teacher when i in Form 2 of my high school years. Straight to the entry, today was not very special if compared to the other days. i came to the class at 8 am after doing a bit exercise as usual. 3 hours straight learning Japanese language plus 2 hours English language really making me exhausted at noon. After a short break, continuing the class with another hour of Japanese language and last 2 hours with Mathematics class really using all of my energy plus I'm fasting today. What make today is bit special was i received a small gift from a friend of mine. It is a small gift, but worth to making me to remember that person. So, that for my journal, hope whoever read this, can correct all my grammatical error cause i know, I'm very suck with grammar. Thank You

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Journal for today

Hello, this is my first journal entry for this site. Actually, I don't have any idea what to write about when we are talking about writing a journal. Although ("As I said" is correct, but "although" is more pleasant) this is my first journal for this site, so it is not my very first journal. I was ("had been" is correct, but "was" is much more natural) asked to write journals by my English's teacher when I was in Form 2 of my high school years.

Straight to the entry, today was not very special if compared to the other days. I went (We usually say "came" if we are still there, and "went" if we are no longer there) to the class at 8 am after doing a bit of exercise as usual. Three (We try not to begin sentences with numerals, but write the number instead) hours straight learning Japanese language plus two (If the number is not part of a name, title, time, or model we usually write it out in the sentence) hours English language really made me exhausted by noon. (Using "by noon" here means there was a gradual progression that finished at noon. Using "at noon" means at 12:00 and only 12:00)

After a short break, I continued the class with another hour of Japanese language and last finally two hours of mathematics (We often say "math" in the U.S., and "maths" in the U.K.). I really used all of my energy, plus I'm fasting today.

What made todayis a bit special was that I received a small gift from a friend of mine. It is a small gift, but worth to making me to remember that person.

So, that's it for my journal ("That's it for ____" means _____ is finished, but it's only used with actions that repeat in cycles, such as: "That's it for class, today!" or "That's it for work, now I can go home!"). I hope whomever reads this can correct all of my grammatical errors, because ("'cause" is extremely informal. It is used most often by children and people who don't speak English well) I know my grammar sucks ("_____ sucks" is a very informal way to disapprove of something. It is used most by people ages 8 to 28).

Thank You.

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Journal for today

Hello, this is my first journal entry in for this site. Actually, I don't have any idea what to write about when we are talking about writing a journal. As i said, this is my first journal in for this site, so but it is not my very first journal. I had been was asked to write journals by my English's teachers when I was in Form 2 of during my high school years.

Straight to the entry, today was not very special if compared to the other days. i came to the class at 8 am after doing a bit of exercise as usual. 3 Three hours straight of learning Japanese language plus 2 hours of English language really making made me exhausted at noon.

After a short break, continuing I continued the class with another hour of Japanese language and last, 2 hours with of Mathematics class really using used all of my energy. Plus I'm fasting today.

What made today is a bit special was that i received a small gift from a friend of mine. It is a small gift, but worth to making me to remember that person.

So, that's it for my journal. I hope whoever reads this can correct all my grammatical errors because i know I'm very really suck with at grammar. Thank You

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