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My part-time job Yesterday i finished my work at 19:30.It's the last day. I have a part-time job in the supermarket.It's a great job.I can meet many different people so that i would not be too nervous when i go to college.And the biggest harvest is that i get a good friend.He is my boss.I don't know why but i was not afraid of him at all when i met him for the first time.Maybe his big smile makes me feel relaxed.He is very kind and sometimes he is like a little child.We both like ice cream and yoghurt so he would buy me a big ice cream when he visited me.To repay this big child,i decided to give him a surprise.I led him to the warehouse and told him my fingues were hurted so he should help me to move the box.When he moved the box,he saw a cute toy and there was a delious ice cream in its arms.He was very excited and we ate it together. It's a precious experience.I will remember this summer firmly.

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My part-time job

Yesterday I finished my work at 19:30. It was the last day.
I had a part-time job in a supermarket. It was a great job. I met many different people so that I would which allowed me to not be too nervous when i go to for college. And The biggest harvest was that I got a good friend. He was my boss. I don't know why, but I was not afraid of him at all when I met him for the first time. Maybe his big smile made me feel relaxed. He was very kind and sometimes he was like a little child. We both liked ice cream and yoghurt so he would buy me a big ice cream when he visited me. To repay this big child, I decided to give him a surprise. I led him to the warehouse and told him my fingures were hurted so he should would help me to move a box. When he moved the box, he saw a cute toy and there was a delicious ice cream in its arms. He was very excited and we ate it together.
It was a precious experience. I will remember this summer firmly forever.

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My part-time job

Yesterday, I finished my work at 19:30.  It was the last day.
I have a part-time job in the supermarket.  It's a great job.  I can meet many different people so that I won't be too nervous when I go to college.  And the biggest harvest is that I've found a good friend.  He is my boss.  I don't know why, but I was not afraid of him at all when I met him for the first time.  Maybe his big smile makes me feel relaxed.  He is very kind, and sometimes he is like a little child.  We both like ice cream and yogurt, so he would buy me a big ice cream when he visited me.  To repay this big child, I decided to give him a surprise.  I led him to the warehouse and told him my fingers were hurt.  Because of this, he had to help me to move a box.  When he moved the box, he saw a cute toy, and there was a delious ice cream in its arms.  He was very excited, and we ate it together.  It was a precious experience.  I will remember this summer firmly.

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