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First notebook entry: Introducing myself hi, you guys. nice to know you! i majored in English when i was in college. but seldom use it for a long time. now i feel it's difficult to speak out. in order to catch it up i decided to practice more. i deal with French wine business. you know the wine become more popular in China. there are many wines sold to China every year. i am looking forward to enjoy your story, to learn languages together.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, you guys. Nice to know you to meet you! I majored in English when I was in college. But I seldom use it. for a long time. OR But I have not used it for a long time. Now I feel it's difficult to speak out. In order to catch it up  I decided to practice more.  I deal with the French wine business. You know the French wine has become more popular in China. There are many wines sold to China every year. I am looking forward to enjoy hear your stories, and to learn languages together.

 

I think that your English is very good. I changed enjoy to hear because that is what is used more offten. Also the word I is always capatalized, just as the first word of every sentence is.

 

http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/capital.asp

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thank you so much!
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Look forward to + doing~~~~ O(∩_∩)O~ please remend the last sentence~

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