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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, you guys. Nice to know you to meet you! I majored in English when I was in college. But I seldom use it. for a long time. OR But I have not used it for a long time. Now I feel it's difficult to speak out. In order to catch it up I decided to practice more. I deal with the French wine business. You know the French wine has become more popular in China. There are many wines sold to China every year. I am looking forward to enjoy hear your stories, and to learn languages together.
I think that your English is very good. I changed enjoy to hear because that is what is used more offten. Also the word I is always capatalized, just as the first word of every sentence is.
http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/capital.asp
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