About Italki

I think italki is a unique and brilliant social language learning system.

[great]

It's kind of a facebook that learners of different languages all over the world gather and share anything they like in the language they prefer.

It's like a facebook where students from all over the world, studying different languages, gather and share anything they want in the language they prefer.

[This sentence is pretty bulky though (too many clauses).  It might be worth trying to break it up and simplify it.]

italki is like a facebook for language learning.  People from all over the world get together to communicate in languages they are learning.

However, I think italki still needs some improvements.

[Totally.]

I hope a native speaker of english corrects the mistakes in my first note entry and shows me my mistakes.

I hope a native speaker of English will correct the mistakes in my first notebook entry.

Thank you italki and thank you the proofreader :)

Thank you italki and thank you proofreader! :)

[Your English is really quite good.  These are small errors.]