I want to improve my english

I am so lucky to meet find the website ---italki, which is known by anybody who wants to speak a language smoothly fluently. When I first used it , a lot of problems appeared. It seemsed that nobody is was going to add me as a partner, even if when I said that I am was a Chinese native. So , I was a little sad, but someone break broke the ice too. I was so glad to meet Mike, an American guy ,who is was going to learn Chinese , and he's got a very funny name "牛肉面” (beef face) in Chinese. We became good friend . In a word , the my final purpose I want goal is to improve my english, oral and writtening. I hope that more and more people come to me, talked to me, corrected my passages. If any help I can do for you,  I will try my best to make it.  If there is any way I can help you, I will try my best to do it. 

There is no tense in Chinese, but when writing in English, you should try to stay in the same tense within the same sentence. So if your sentence is in the past tense, try to stay that way and not switch back and forth.  Good luck. Akilah

I want to improve my English

I am so lucky to meet the website ---italki, which is known by anybody who wants to speak a language smoothly.

I am so lucky to have found this website, italki, which is well known by anyone who wants to speak a foreign language smoothly (you could also say fluently).

When I first use it , a lot of problems appeard. It seems that nobody is going to add me as a partner , even  if I said that I am a Chinese native.

When I first used it, a lot of problems came up. It seemed that no one would add me as a partner even when I said that I was a Chinese native.

So , I was a little sad, but someone break the ice too. I was so glad to meet Mike , a American guy ,who is going to learn Chinese , and he got a very funny name "牛肉面”in Chinese.

So, I was a little sad, but someone broke the ice. I was so glad to meet Mike, an American guy who is going to learn Chinese (you could also say: who wants to learn Chinese). He has a very funny name (牛肉面) in Chinese.

We became good friend . In a word , the final purpose I want is to improve my english, oral and writting. I hope that more and more people came (past tense) to me ,talked (past tense) to me , correted my passages. If any help I can do for you , I will try my best to make it.

We became good friends. (I think you should leave out "in a word") My main (you could also say: "primary") purpose is to improve my English, oral and written. I hope that more and more people come to me, talk to me, and correct my passages (you could also say: "entries"). Also, if I can be of any help to you, I will try my best.

I want to improve my english

I am so lucky to find the website ---italki, which is known by anybody who wants to speak a language smoothly. When I first used it , a lot of problems appeared. It seems that nobody was going to add me as a partner , even if I said that I am a Chinese native. So , I was a little sad, but someone broke the ice tho. I was so glad to meet Mike , an American guy ,who is going to learn Chinese , and he has  a very funny name "牛肉面”in Chinese. We became good friends. In a word , the final purpose I want is to improve my English, oral and written. I hope that more and more people come to me ,talk to me , correct my passages. If there is any help I can do for you , I will try my best to make it.

I wish you you the best of luck. I wish I could be your language partner, but I never have the time. Sadly I bet young Chinese women have no problem finding a language partner. Best of luck, Kevin.