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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm a college student.To be honest,i am a little nervous when i write down the so-called introduction.I guess it's the same like our exam-composition,OK,er....i am a girl ,i am open-mind,i like cartoon ,so my mum always says i am a little forever.i am curious about the new things.And ,i am little inferiority.Well,and my main cours is COMPUTER SCIENCE.if you are intersted in it ,just contact,while you're not,contact me ,i hope i can find a fd to learn together. I want to imporve my oral english ,i find that i can write down it ,but i cannot speak it out,or..i cannot speak as i dream to be.Anyway ,i want to improve,i want to make friends with you all,this is my pure thought.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a college student. To be honest, I am a little nervous when i write down about writing the so-called introduction. I guess it's the same just like our exam-composition,OK,er....I am a girl, I am open-mind, I like cartoons, so my mum always says i am a little girl forever. I am curious about the new things. And, I am little inferiority. (This does not make much sense) Well,and my main course is COMPUTER SCIENCE. If you are intersted in it ,just contact,while you're not,contact me. I hope I can find a friend to learn together with. 
I want to imporve my oral English, I find that I can write down it, but I cannot speak it out loud,or..i cannot speak as I dream to be want to. Anyway, I want to improve, I want to make friends with you all, this is my pure thought. (The last phrase sounds very awkward to English ears)

This was very good and I could easily understand what you wanted to say. Also, please take note of the punctuation, which I tried to correct throughout. Good luck!! :)

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