Search from various English teachers...
Spain flagmalula_22
BALANCE OPINION ESSAY It is known that nowadays we overuse the cars, and it damage the environment because the use of cars gives to the atmosphere a huge among of co2. For that reasons, the authorities try to limit the use of cars by different methods. But what is the best method that local authorities should use? On one hand, some people believe that they could invest their effort in education, because most people don’t realise the impact cars make, they do not know how many pollution produce their cars, for that authorities should make advertisements about the use of cars. For instance, they could promote the public transport or share a car. On the other hand, others think that the best way is making people pay to drive through cities, the charges make people think about how necessary is it go in our own car, and make us think about others ways to go to the city. Furthermore, there are people that use the car in very short distances and maybe if they have to pay they would prefer going walking. On balance, I reckon that general speaking we use the car a lot and we need to care the environment, reduce the use of cars is a good way to reduce the carbon footprint and in my opinion the best way is with education but it is a good idea implement charges too. I would like to finish saying that each thing we do to care the environment is very useful and the authorities should be involved in this.

Corrections · 2

0
BALANCE OPINION ESSAY

It is known that nowadays we overuse cars, and
this damages the environment because the use of cars releases into the atmosphere a huge amount of co2. For that reason, the authorities try to limit the use of cars by different methods. But what is the best method that local authorities should use?
On the one hand, some people believe that they should invest their efforts in education, because most people don’t realise the impact cars have; they do not know how much pollution their cars produce. To show that authorities should make advertisements about the use of cars.
For instance, they could promote public transport or ride-sharing.
On the other hand, others think that the best way is making people pay to drive through cities. The charges make people think about how necessary it really might be to drive, and make us think about other ways to go to the city.
Furthermore, there are people that use the car to go very short distances, and maybe, if they have to pay they would prefer to walk.
On balance, I reckon that, generally speaking, we use cars a lot and we need to take care of the environment. Reducing the use of cars is a good way to reduce the carbon footprint and in my opinion the best way is with education, but charging fines is also a good idea.
I would like to finish by saying that each thing we do to take care of the environment is very useful and the authorities should be involved in this.
0
BALANCE OPINION ESSAY

It is known that nowadays we overuse the cars, and it damage this damages the environment because the use of cars gives to the atmosphere a huge among of co2 releases a huge amount of CO2 into the atmosphere. For that reasons reason, the authorities try to limit the use of cars by different various methods. But what is the best method that local authorities should use?

On the one hand, some people believe that they could invest their effort in education, because most people don’t realise the impact cars make, they do not know how many pollution produce their cars much pollution their cars produce. for that For this, authorities should make advertisements about the use of cars. For instance, they could promote the public transport or share a car car sharing / the sharing of cars.

On the other hand, others think that the best way is by making (or "to make" instead of "by making") people pay to drive through cities. The the charges make people think about how necessary is it go in our their own car, and make us think about others ways to go to the city. Furthermore, there are people that use the car in their car for very short distances and maybe if they have had to pay they would prefer going walking. to walk instead.

On balance, I reckon that general generally speaking we use the car a lot and we need to care about the environment. Reducing reduce the use of cars is a good way to reduce the our carbon footprint. and in my opinion the best way is with education but it is a good idea implement charges too. In my opinion the best way to reduce the use of cars is with education, but making people pay to drive through cities is a good idea too.

I would like to finish by saying that each thing we do to care about the environment is very useful and the authorities should be involved in this.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today