what kind of music do you like?
nobody can deny that music it's so important in our life.And there are many people prefer some kind of music such as :Rap,k.pop etc...
For me,Ilove k.pop music so much because this kind of music have energy and gives me a pawer and makes me so happe.moreover,Ilike how they mix music and dance together,so that's why Ilove k.pop music.
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What Kind of Music Do You Like?
Nobody can deny that music it's is so very important in our lives life. And there are many people who prefer some kind of music such as: rap, k.pop k-pop, etc...
As for me, I love k.pop k-pop music so much because it this kind of music* have has energy and gives me a pawer power and makes me so happy happe. Moreover, I like how they mix music and dance together, so that's why I love k.pop k-pop music**. !***
Great Job! Just a few corrections!
*While this was correct, it was unnecessary because you had just introduced the subject. You can just use the word "it" instead.
**Here you don't have to state "music" over again, as you had already explained that k-pop was a type of music.
***You can use the exclamation mark to show stronger emotion, such as: surprise, anger, or happiness. Here's a really good explanation of the exclamation mark:
https://www.grammarly.com/blog/exclamation-mark/
When writing in English, you add a space after commas (,), periods (.), and any other form of punctuation.
I hope that this all helps!!!
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