Some Vocabularies
1- He is (devotee) of being a fan of Liverpool.
2- She charmed him with her (sophistication, dignified bearing and her enterprising spirit.)
3-The peace agreement (reinforced) the economy.
4- After he got fired, he was thinking about (reinstating) his former job.
5- The shack was completely (dilapidated) by the hurricane.
6-The (deterioration) in agriculture is because of the global warming.
7- The (slums) on the (outskirts) of your city caused many troubles to people downtown.
8-It was (evident) that TENET would be a good movie to watch in cinemas.
9- Not all (grimes) can be cleaned by detergent
10- For many girls, their fathers are their (guardian angles).
11-(In accordance) with their (cultural norms) and (customary), they will not accept you to be her husband.
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Some Vocabularies
1- He is (devotee) of being a fan of Barcelona.
He is a devotee (of OR to) Barcelona. He is a fan of Barcelona.
Or he is a devoted fan of Barcelona.
2- She charmed him by her (sophistication, dignified bearing and her enterprising spirit.)
dignified bearing??? don't understand. enterprising spirit= ingenuity?
She charmed him by her sophistication. yes
3-The peace agreement (reinforced) the economy.
The peace agreement strengthened the economy.
4- After he got fired, he was thinking about (reinstating) his former job.
?? seems like you couldn't reinstate it if you were fired. Not sure what the intended thought is
4- The shack was completely (dilapidated) by the hurricane.
I would use destroyed - dilapidated is more for natural decay, not destruction.
5-The (deterioration) in agriculture is because of the global warming.
The decline in productivity in agriculture is the product of global warming.
6- The (slums) on the (outskirts) of your city caused many troubles to people downtown.
yes- or "have caused" if applicable
7-It was (evident) that TENET would be a good movie to watch in cinemas. yes
8- Not all grime can be cleaned by detergent.
(this is not a word that I find in plural. kind of like peoples- its possible, but not frequently used in that context.)
9- For many girls, their fathers are their (guardian angles).
yes-- but misspelled- guardian angels. (angels sounds ainjels- the others sounds like Ain-guls, used in math and measurements)
10-In accordance with their cultural norms and customs, they will not accept you to be her husband.yes
“I tried to use the words between the parentheses”- Good job on vocabulary expansion! I referred you back to some more common vocabulary in some instances, not trying to discourage the use of these words- but in some contexts, I feel these words are too formal or not quite fitting. But your usage of transitions and thoughts are very good.
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