Weekly diary from 32 year old ordinary worker in S Korea. (hoping that someone makes it natural)
It is a finally Saturday when I can review the week and relax and loose my tension.
This week, I have started the KIDP design consulting program that I am in charge of as a manager and a consultant. I was doubtful that I am qualified and good enough to meet a participant company's need. Still, that is my concern and pushes myself to prepare for that.
This might be one of professions that I want to gain like consulting business model for start ups.
This year, I have been assigned to a position where I have supervisors who I ask for their wisdom and permissions and team members who I work with and think about their motivations as well as their growths. I am learning about the organization system. which is an essential aspect for collaboration.
huuu...
Actually, It is difficult to manage and have a good balance between my personal time and working time. I want to be a good member of our work place through showing diligence and responsibility that I have from the projects. Meanwhile, I want to prepare for things for my life like spending time with my wife, planning for a house and studying English. All the things are important.
How can I manage them 😭... That is my current dilemma.
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Weekly diary from a 32 year old ordinary worker in South Korea. (hoping that someone makes it natural.)
Try not to use too many abbreviations, like S for South, in any formal writing. It's better to have the "a" before your self-description.
It is a finally Saturday when I can review the week and relax and loosen (or "lose") my tension.
https://www.gingersoftware.com/english-online/spelling-book/confusing-words/loose-lose
This week, I have started the KIDP design consulting program that I am in charge of as a manager and a consultant. I was doubtful whether (this is probably better than "that" here) I am qualified and good enough to meet a participant company's need. Still, that is my concern, and it pushes me to prepare for that.
We mostly use "myself" when the subject of the verb is "I". Here, it is not.
https://www.lexico.com/grammar/when-to-use-myself-and-yourself
This might be one of the professions that I want to achieve, like consulting on business model for start ups.
This year, I have been assigned to a position where I have supervisors who I ask for (probably leave out the "their") wisdom and permission, and team members who I work with, thinking about their motivations as well as their development. I am learning about the organization of systems, which is an essential aspect for collaboration.
This section had a lot of instances of "and", and became quite tricky to read. I have tried to simplify it a little without changing your meaning. If I misunderstood, I can only apologise.
huuu...
Actually, It is difficult to manage to have a good balance between my personal time and working time. I want to be a good member of our work place by showing diligence and responsibility for my projects. Meanwhile, I want to prepare for things in my life like spending time with my wife, planning for a house and studying English. All these things are important.
These are tiny suggestions, just for a more natural flow. Your version is completely understandable.
How can I manage them 😭... That is my current dilemma.
Managing "work-life balance" can be a problem for all of us, and even more so if you and your wife have children. But it is so important. Good work with your English, and good luck with your consulting ambitions :)
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