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Could you check the mistakes? Hi! I am watching Friends and I am really like it . Recently I have got an idea to wrote some facts about Friends. I am inspired with this while I was watching video on you tube. Moreover I jotted down 10 facts: 1. In beginning the name of this popular series had several changes, like: " Cafe of insomnia" "6 singles" , " six for one" ,"The once of West village " , "Front of the corner" . And after then in nineteen ninety forth summer it is renamed " Friends". 2. Creators of this series was really good friends . They studied and worked together. 3. The oldest of this gang was Lisa Kudrow who played Phoebe and the youngest was Jennifer Anniston who played Rachel . It is interesting that Courtney Cox who played Monica was younger an 3 year than David Schwimmer which played Ross . But she played as Rosse's younger sister. 4. In the creator's plan had 4 main character besides Chandler and Phoebe. 5. David Schwimmer got his character without audience . 6. The last one who got his character was Jennifer Anniston . In that day she wanted to left career of actress. 7. Rarely who knows that before starting pilot Jennifer and Courtney was switched characters. 8. In the beginning of the show nobody of actor and actress was famous except Courtney Cox. Nonetheless everyone who played got an Emmy awards statue except Courtney . 9. Matt LeBlanc had only 11 dollars before he played Joey. He had 6 audience and was very hopeless to get a job. 10. Laughing the behind of screen was real. 3000 guests could see the shooting process . But important episodes of shooting was going in empty place because creators wanted to kept an intrigue. ------Thank you!!!

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Hi! I am watching Friends and I am really like it . Recently I have got an idea to write some facts about Friends. I was inspired by this whilst I was watching avideo on youtube.
Moreover (This is formal word, I would omit it).I jotted down 10 facts:
1. In beginning,the name of this popular series had several changes, like: " Cafe of insomnia" "6 singles" , " six for one" ,"The once of West village " , "Front of the corner" . And (do not start a sentence with and) After that in the summer of (which year??) it was renamed " Friends".
2. The creators of this series were really good friends . They studied and worked together.
3. The oldest of this gang was Lisa Kudrow who played Phoebe and the youngest was Jennifer Anniston who played Rachel .
It is interesting that Courtney Cox who played Monica was three years younger than David Schwimmer who played Ross . But she played as Ross' (where there is "s's", the last s is often removed, but it's fine to say "Ross's" too)younger sister.
4. In The creator's plan had 4 main characters besides Chandler and Phoebe.
5. David Schwimmer got his character without an audience .
6. The last one who got her character was Jennifer Anniston . On that day she wanted to leave her actressing career
7. It is rarely known that before starting the pilot Jennifer and Courtney were switched characters.
8. In the beginning of the show none of the actors or actresses were famous except for Courtney Cox. Despite this, everyone who played got an Emmy awards statue except Courtney .
9. Matt LeBlanc had only 11 dollars before he played Joey. He had 6 audience and was quite hopeless about getting a job.
10. The laughing the behind of the screen was real. 3000 guests could see the shooting process . But important episodes were done in an empty place because the creators wanted to keep the plot a secret.


------Thank you!!!
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Nice job, Alua. Here are some things you might consider I am really liking it recently I had the idea inspired by this summer of nineteen-ninety four it was renamed were really good friends three years younger than David Schwimmer who played Ross The creator's plan had (don't need "in") without audition(?) The last one who got their character to leave her acting career

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