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ALCOHOL CONSUMPTION AMONG TEENAGERS 3/3 Alcohol is the most widely consumed substance among students aged 14-18. Three out of four young people (in that age group) had ever tried it, almost as many had consumed it in the past 12 months and more than 60% in the past 30 days. The average age of starting consumption is between 13 and 14 years old. Although consumption has maintained a stable trend in recent years, intensive consumption (drunkenness or alcohol poisoning and binge drinking) has increased in Spain. Almost 2 out of 5 adolescents declare that they have been drunk at some time in the last 30 days, emphasising that the prevalence of binge drinking is slightly higher in girls than in boys. Four out of six students aged 14-18 years admitted having consumed five or more drinks in an interval of approximately 2 hours (binge drinking) in the last 30 days, this situation being more frequent among boys than girls.

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ALCOHOL CONSUMPTION AMONG TEENAGERS 3/3

Alcohol is the most widely consumed substance among students aged 14-18. Three out of four young people (in that age group) had everve tried it,; almost as many hadve consumed it in the past 12 months and more than 60% in the past 30 days.

The average age of starting consumption is between 13 and 14 years old.

Although consumption has maintained a stable trend in recent years, intensive consumption (drunkenness or alcohol poisoning and binge drinking) has increased in Spain. Almost 2 out of 5 adolescents declare that they have been drunk at some time in the last 30 days, emphasising that and the prevalence of binge drinking is slightly higher over this period in girls than in boys.

Four out of six students aged 14-18 years have admitted to having consumed five or more drinks in an interval of approximately 2 hours (binge drinking) in the last 30 days, this situation being more frequent among boys than girls.

Good You should rate your English abilities as higher than you do. In your text, you sometimes write your numbers and other times you do not. You should use a consistent approach, and writing out the numbers is preferable for smaller numbers (e.g. ten and under). Saludos desde Canadá.
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ALCOHOL CONSUMPTION AMONG TEENAGERS 3/3

Alcohol is the most widely consumed substance among students aged 14-18. Three out of four young people in that age group have admitted to having tried it, almost as many have consumed it in the past 12 months and more than 60% in the past 30 days.

The average age of starting consumption is between 13 and 14 years old.

Although consumption has maintained a stable trend in recent years, intensive consumption (drunkenness or alcohol poisoning and binge drinking) has increased in Spain. Almost 2 out of 5 adolescents declare that they have been drunk at some time in the last 30 days, emphasizing that the prevalence of binge drinking is slightly higher in girls than in boys.

Four out of six students aged 14-18 years admitted having consumed five or more drinks in an interval of approximately 2 hours (binge drinking) in the last 30 days, this situation being more frequent among boys than girls.
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ALCOHOL CONSUMPTION AMONG TEENAGERS 3/3

Alcohol is the most widely consumed substance among students aged 14-18. Three out of four young people (in that age group) had ever have tried it, almost as many had have consumed it in the past 12 months and more than 60% in the past 30 days. (Oscar, you can use present tense when reporting statistics in this manner)

The average age of starting/first consumption is between 13 and 14 years old.

Although consumption has maintained a stable trend in recent years, intensive consumption (drunkenness or alcohol poisoning and binge drinking) has increased in Spain. Almost 2 out of 5 adolescents declare that they have been drunk at some time/point in the last 30 days, emphasizing that the prevalence of binge drinking is slightly higher in girls than in boys.

Four out of six students aged 14-18 years admitted to having consumed five or more drinks in an interval of approximately 2 hours (binge drinking) in the last 30 days, this situation being more frequent among boys than girls.

Nicely written Oscar. A few small corrections for you to consider.
It is a sad state which our youth are in! Why has alcohol become such a "rite of passage" and so important to them?! I have a 17 year old and in Canada and we see similar statistics even though alcohol is illegal for minors under 18. Luckily my son is often the 'designated driver', so has a convenient excuse not to be pulled into the new sport of binge drinking - and the other times, I admit I really don't want to know what he might be doing!
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ALCOHOL CONSUMPTION AMONG TEENAGERS 3/3

Alcohol is the most widely consumed substance among students aged 14-18. Three out of four young people (in that age group) had ever tried it, almost as many have consumed it in the past 12 months and more than 60% in the past 30 days.

The average age of starting consumption is between 13 and 14 years old.

Although consumption has maintained a stable trend in recent years, intensive consumption (drunkenness or alcohol poisoning and binge drinking) has increased in Spain. Almost 2 out of 5 adolescents declare that they have been drunk at some time in the last 30 days, emphasising that the prevalence of binge drinking is slightly higher in girls than in boys.

Four out of six students aged 14-18 years admitted having consumed five or more drinks in an interval of approximately 2 hours (binge drinking) in the last 30 days, this situation being more frequent among boys than girls.



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