August 27th, 2020
Today is the 18th day of my 30 days challenge.
Today, I want to write about Animals in Medical Research.
Do you think animals should be used for medical research?
I know it is always a controversial topic.
In the ideal world, the value of lives should be equal and we should not waste animal's lives for any reason. But, it is true that humans were able to prolong their life to develop medical technologies by sacrificing a lot of animals in medical tests. Recently I'm realizing how important it is to have high quality medical practices especially since we are experiencing this pandemic right now.
It's too hard to conclude my opinion , but I think we should always remember and appreciate that there are many animals which have died for human benefits.
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August 27th, 2020
Today is the 18th day of my 30 days challenge.
Today, I want to write about Animals in Medical Research.
Do you think animals should be used for medical research?
I know it has always been a controversial topic.
In the ideal world, the value of lives should be equal and we should not waste animal's lives for any reason. But, it is true that humans were able to prolong their life to develop medical technologies by sacrificing tons of animals in medical tests. Recently I realised the importance to have high quality medical practices especially during this pandemic right now.
It's too hard to conclude my opinion , but I think we should always remember and appreciate that there are many animals which have died for human benefits.
Hi Aoi, your writing is awesome, you didn't have much grammatical mistakes at all. I edited some bits so it looks more clean.
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