Osaka Bay: Could you please check my sentences?
The prefecture Osaka has the Osaka Bay.
The Bay is between Osaka and the big island Sikoku, actually there are one more small island Awaji between them to be exact.
Awaji island belongs to the prefecture Hyogo, where is northwestern next to Osaka.
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance.
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Osaka Bay: Could you please check my sentences?
The prefecture Osaka has the Osaka Bay.
Within Osaka prefecture lies a large expanse of water called 'Osaka Bay'
or - Next to the prefecture of Osaka lies Osaka Bay (to 'lie' = to lie down. we often say water lies (somewhere) its a bit advanced. sorry )
The Bay sits (we often say things (in nature) sit - it means it is placed there / it exists there) between Osaka and the big island of Shikoku. Actually, there is (we use 'is' when there is one thing - 例：there is one island - there are two islands etc.) one more small island called Awaji between them to be exact.
Awaji island belongs to the prefecture of Hyogo, which is northwest of Osaka.
so all together.....
Within Osaka prefecture lies a large expanse of water called 'Osaka Bay'
The bay sits between Osaka and the big island of Shikoku. Actually, there is one more small island called Awaji between them to be exact.
Awaji island belongs to the prefecture of Hyogo, which is northwest of Osaka.
Sorry. Lots of changes here to make it sound nice but I understood clearly what you were trying to say! Hope that helps. Any questions, just ask. 頑張ってください。
Guy Butler
Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance.
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