Increase communication between people
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It is crucially important for people to communicate to each other. Some of them suggest that they do it less than in the past. However, I believe that it is not true. Nowadays socialization has become stronger. I think this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the Internet allows to communicate easier. Restrictions such as distance, language border have disappeared. People communicate, share their opinions, provide information to persons who live in other country and use other language. The Internet allows to join people in a simple way. Also, humans who are not able to meet other people can communicate with them using the network. For instance, during Covid-2019 pandemic I am able to see and talk to my relatives using e-services. However, if this pandemic was in the past, people didn’t have to communicate with each other. Therefore, modern technologies improve people’s socialization.
Furthermore, people spend less time on their job. In the past a lot of humans worked more than 11 hours a day. After the work time people needed a rest and not to socialize with each other. However, nowadays due to the improvements in work conditions they work about 8 hours. Therefore, people have more free time. Using this time persons communicate with each other more than in the past. Nowadays humanity spends a lot of time on socialization. Also, a lot of activities have appeared. Therefore, people use them and their time to improve their communication.
In conclusion, I believe that people socialize more than they did it in the past. The main reason is that technologies allows them to interact with each other. Also, new work conditions provide people the opportunity to spend more time with each other.
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