August 25th, 2020
This is the 17th day of my 30-days challenge.
From today, I would like to stating my opinion to topics.
Today, I'm writing about Age Restrictions on Social Media.
Age restrictions should be placed on social media sites?
I would say, I agree to restrict information on social media depends on age.
There are so much information on social media that it difficult for even adults to judge whether the information is reliable or not. Also, social media can be taken advantage of for advertisements or promotions easily. If you don't have enough knowledges to handle a lot of information, you might get wrong information and it might get you bad influence in your real life.
I think age restriction on social media can protect young people not to ruin their life.
Age restrictions prevent cyber bullying?
Personally, I think age have nothing to do with cyber bullying.
Stating your opinion on social media is much easier than saying it in person.
There is no doubt that opinions turn to clitics and abusive gradually, which are the most element of cyber bullying.
In my opinion, we need to make a reasonable legal means in order to stop cyber bullying more than age restriction.
The time that children spend on social networking sites should be supervised by parents?
Physically speaking, spending a long time on social networking is not good for their health.
Loss of Eyesight and Impaired motor skills would occur to children.
On the other hand, using social networking in education is becoming more popular nowadays so it might be challenging to find a good balance of on/off social networking.
If I become a parent, I try to make good use of social networking while protecting children's health.
Thank you for reading my note to the end.
Please feel free to leave your comment and correct my errors.
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×「I would like to stating my opinion to topics.」
〇「I would like to state my opinion to topics.」
×「information on social media depends on 」
〇「information on social media depending on 」
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