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Argentina flagAlejandro
My son is growing Hi! I need to improve my english, for it, I need to do something about it, for example, try to write. So, here I am, trying to write. I did not know what write, so, I decided to tell you about the big goal of my son... he learned to ride by bicycle! A few days ago, he was riding on his bicycle inside the department. I like that he ride on his bicycle, but ride inside a departament is so noise to people that live below! It so annoying to hear the noice of the wells's bicicle from the above department. So, to try do less noise, I said him that he is growing, and he need to learn how to ride his bicycle without wells. Of course, he is not big, only has 4 years, but the bicycle do less noise without this little wells. So, after a few days practicing ride his bicycle without wells (we practice inside most of the time because the cov19), we went out, and for me surprise, after a bit block he was riding alone. Maybe I'm an old, but when I left him alone, a tear fell from my cheek.

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My son is growing up.

Hi! I need to improve my English and for that, I need to do something about it, for example, try to write.
So, here I am, trying to write. I did not know what to write, so, I have decided to tell you about the big goal of my son... he learned to ride by a bicycle!

A few days ago, he was riding on his bicycle inside the apartment. I like that he rides on his bicycle, but riding inside an apartment is so noisy to for the people that live below! It so annoying to hear the noise of the bicycle wheels from the apartment above.

So, to try do to make less noise, I said told him that he is growing up, and he needed to learn how to ride his bicycle without training wheels. Of course, he is not big, only has 4 years old, but the bicycle do makes less noise without these little wheels.

So, after a few days practicing riding his bicycle without training wheels (we practice inside most of the time because of the cov19), we went out, and for me to my surprise, after a bit block he was riding alone. Maybe I'm an old man, but when I left him alone, a tear fell from my cheek.

Hola Alejandro, muy bien.
Grow - crecer, físicamente. Grow up - crecer, madurar.
Riding, con "ing" es la actividad.
Do - hacer, más para acciones. Make - hacer, pero más como fabricar. Bueno, el inglés es horrible - make a noise - ¡no hay explicación!
training wheels - ruedines/rueditas
Tiene cuatro años, sí, pero en inglés utilizamos el adjetivo: He is four years old. Es como "es viejo de cuatro años". Igual con tengo hambre - I am hungry - estoy hambriento (adjetivo); tengo calor - I am hot - estoy caliente, (sí, tiene doble sentido en inglés también.)
Es una historia bonita. Tengo mellizas y he pasado por esa etapa.
Saludos desde Córdoba, España. Simón.
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Thanks Katie!
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Your English is very good! I remember learning to ride my bicycle, I'm sure these will be great memories for you and your son. Here are a few corrections for you, English grammar can be very confusing but I could understand everything you were saying. "but ride inside a departament is so noise" --> but riding inside an apartment is so noisy "So, to try do less noise, I said him that he is growing" --> So, to try to be less noisy, I said to him that he is growing "and for me surprise" -->and to my surprise/and it surprised me that Good luck with your English!

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