[Essay] (( "Learning foreign language" )) By the way, we can correct each others' essay.
There is a humanity's nature - curious. Learning foreign language is a good way for us to explore the another new world, which enable us to see the difference in different ways. Foreign culture - music, film and faith, we know more than more advisable to solve easily my daily problem. It is incredible but real. Such as in that moment I broke up and lost myself, I could introspect more clearly into myself through the western perspective .That is blow my mind at the first time but it works well.
Learning foreign culture is a great thing. Unfortunately, we have to strive learning English for exam. It is necessary for us. Especially, not English native speaker. If we want to get a better career or life , we have to spend our whole life strive to learn English. Quite honestly, I would rather learn concrete knowledge more than spend most time to learn the usage of a tool.
Nevertheless, I'm still expecting more new things - foreign culture , and also I believe that I will master the tool and more easily use it. we should venture outside of our comfort zone to grow,
and eventually our wishes will come true. That's why I've been learning English for about four months as well. XD
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[Essay] (( "Learning a foreign language" )) By the way, we can correct each others' essays.
There is (or "there's") a human nature humanity's nature - curiosity. Learning a foreign language is a good way for us to explore the another new world, which enable us to see the differences in different ways. Foreign culture - such as music, film and faith, we know more than is thought at first glance* than more advisable and can help to solve easily my daily problem easily. It is (or "it's") incredible but real. Such as So much so that in that moment I broke up and lost myself, I could introspect myself more clearly into myself through the western perspective. That is It's blowing my mind at doing it the first time, but it works well.
Learning foreign culture is a great thing. Unfortunately, we have to strive to learning English for an exam. It is (or "it's") necessary for us. Especially, as we're not English native English speakers. If we want to get a better career or life** , we have to spend our whole life strive striving to learn English. Quite honestly, I would rather learn concrete knowledge more than spending the most time to learning the usage of a tool.
Nevertheless, I'm still expecting more new things - foreign culture, and also I also*** believe that I will master the tool and use it more easily use it. We should venture outside of our comfort zone to grow,
and eventually our wishes will come true. That's also why I've been learning English for about four months as well. XD
Great Job! Just a few corrections!
*I wasn't really sure what you were trying to say here, but I tried to guess based on the context.
**"life or career" sounds better.
***Although I don't think that this was wrong, the sentence flows much better in this order.
I noticed that you didn't seem to use a lot of contractions, so I'm including a link to a site that explains the uses and formation of the most common contractions in English. They'll really save you a lot of time in the long run.
https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/style-and-usage/using-contractions.html
I hope that this helps!!!
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