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I have writing in tense simple.
Hello, My name is Saul. I am 21 years old. Every days, I wake up and get up already at 6:30 am or 7:00a. After, I take a shower and I do my breakfast. I leave my house at 8:00 am to work. I work from 9:00am to 5:00pm. When I arrive at home, I watch a movies and I read a special books. On Tuesday, My brother Beto does the breakfast. because he wakes up 3:00 am. He is a Baker, and he has a little business at the street. He likes orange juice with toasts bread. Only that day he does the breakfast. On Wendnesday, I work in the afternnon, because I can do. My boss usually has meet of work in the morning. Because I should arrive at the afternoon. While that happen, I work at house.
On Thuesday, Elizabeth is my partner in the camp. We visits customers all day. Elizabeth always lunch, like a salad, fruits, she sometimes is so angry in the work, but she is pretties confident.
On Frindays, Generally I do report for my boss. On Saturday, We make feedback all workers of the business, after there is an activities or party.
Good, I try writing with the words that I know at my head.
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Correct me! Thank you
I have writing in tense simple.
Hello, my name is Saul. I am 21 years old. Every day I wake up and get ready at 6:30 or 7 a.m. Then I take a shower and eat breakfast. I leave my house at 8:00 am and go to work from 9 to 5 p.m. When I arrive at home, I watch a movie or read special books (?)On Tuesday, my brother, Beto, makes breakfast because he wakes up 3 am. He is a baker and he has a little business all his own . He likes orange juice with toasted bread. Only that day he does the breakfast. On Wendnesday, I work in the afternnoon, because I can. My boss usually meets with me in the morning. Because I should arrive at the afternoon. While that happen, I work at house.
On Thursday, my partner, Elizabeth, works in the camp. We visits with customers all day. Elizabeth always likes to eat a lunch of salad and fruit. She sometimes becomes very angry at work, however, she is very confident.
On Frin
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Please correct me. Thank you! [1]
I have am writing in simple tense simple.
Hello, my name is Saul. I am 21 years old. Every days, I wake up and get am up already at by 6:30am or 7:00am. Afterwards, I take a shower and I do make {or: eat} my breakfast. I leave my house at 8:00 am to go to work. I work from 9:00am to 5:00pm. [2] When I arrive at home, I watch a movies and I read a special books. [3] On Tuesdays, my brother Beto does the makes breakfast. because he wakes up 3:00 am. He is a baker, [4] and he has a little business at on the street. He likes orange juice with toasts bread. [5] Only on that day he does the he make breakfast. On Wednesdays, I work in the afternoon, because I can do so. My boss usually has a (work) meeting of work [6] in the morning. Because of that, I should can/am able to/could arrive at in the afternoon. While that happens, I work at house from home.
On Thursdays, Elizabeth is my partner in the camp. [7] We visits customers all day. Elizabeth always brings/packs(?) [8] lunch, like a salad, fruits, and she sometimes is gets so angry in the at work, but she is pretty confident.
On Fridays, Generally I generally do report for to my boss. [9] On Saturdays, we make give feedback to all workers of the business, and afterwards, there is an activity or party.
Thanks for helping me.
- "Correct me!" is a command and sounds a bit rude and demanding.
- Be consistent with whether or not there is a space between the time and "am/pm". Either it's all 7:00am or 7:00 am, but it reads sloppy to mix and match.
- "Movies" and "books" are plural, and "a" is a singular article, so it doesn't belong.
- A "Baker" with a capital "B" would mean that his last name (apellido) is "Baker".
- With "toast" (no "s") or "toasted bread".
- It's your boss, so it's already implied to be about work, so adding "work" sounds redundant.
- The verb is missing here.
- It's not really clear what the relationship between Thursdays and Elizabeth is. I'm guessing that the implication is that you only work with her on this day, and not on other days.
- Reporting "for my boss" would mean "en vez de mi patron."
- "Bueno" in the context of concluding a conversation translates to: "So" or "Well", "So/Well, that's all (for now)", "So/Well, that's it".
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