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Day off for your family I’m living in Siberia, so if you’ve ever listened about this area you know that it has the coldest winter. Siberian family often love spend their time doing some winter activities. Despite this fact, in summer it always has warm weather. In summer the most families spend their time going on a picnic where they are playing volleyball or badminton. If they don’t have such opportunity, in our city there is a big recreation ground where you can do the same. If we talk about some winter activities, there is a big variety of them, such as snowboarding, skiing or ice skating. It takes for about fifteen minutes to go to the mountain where is located a ski center, there your family will be excited by different types of entertainment. In summer there is a hotel for guests who would spend their time with nature. As I said before there is a big variety of summer and winter activities, but all of them are suitable and comfortable for little children. I wish it would be more safety. It’s better to say that our city is the best place to visit it with the whole family, because of its big variety of entertainments. It doesn’t matter what season is now.

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A Day off for your family

I’m living I live in (it is not incorrect to say "I am living in", but it is more natural to say either "I live in" or, perhaps "Right now, I'm living in") in Siberia. , so if If you’ve ever listened heard about this area, you know that it has the coldest winters. (If you say the coldest winter, it sounds like you are comparing one winter in Siberia to all of the other winters in Siberia, and that the current winter is the coldest one. To say a place has the coldest winters compared to other places, it needs to be plural.) Siberian family families often love to spend their time doing some winter activities. Despite this fact/Despite the cold winters, in summer it we always has have warm weather/the summers here are always warm/it is always warm here in the summer.
In the summer the most families spend their time going on a picnics where they are playing volleyball or badminton/going on picnics, playing volleyball and badminton. If they don’t have such an opportunity (If you want to say they have such an opportunity, you need to include the word "an". It might sound more natural to me to say, "If they don't have the opportunity to travel outside of the city"), in our city there is a big recreation ground park where you can do the same. If we talk about some winter activities, there is a big variety of them. We have a wide/great variety of winter activities, such as snowboarding, skiing or ice skating.
It takes for about fifteen minutes to go to the mountain where is located there is a ski center lodge/resort., there your family will be excited by different types of entertainment. There is exciting fun and entertainment there that your whole family can/will enjoy/They have many different types of entertainment there that is fun for the whole family. (Your sentence is not incorrect, but it is awkard. I gave two options of ways to say it that might be more natural and say what you mean to say. There are other ways, but what I offered sounds more natural to me and delivers the message. ) In the summer, there is a hotel for guests who enjoy spending would spend their enjoy spending time with in nature.
As I said before, there is a big wide/great variety of summer and winter activities, but all of them are suitable and comfortable for little children. I wish it would be more safety safe. (this sentence is correct, but because it is so different than all previous sentences, I think it makes more sense to add the word "However" or "All that said" or more sentences to describe that, "Despite all of these fun activities, unfortunately, it is not all that safe." It is confusing that you said there are many activites that are suitable for children but then say you wish it was more safe. This may be more an issue of writing style than english though, I'm not sure.)
It’s better to say that our city is the best place to visit it with the whole family, because of its big variety of entertainments. It doesn’t matter what season is now. (I'm not exactly sure what you are wanting to say with this sentence, but I think it is better said like this. This is one option, I'm sure there are many ways to say it.) In summary, our city is a great place to visit with the whole family because of the wide variety of entertainment we have, no matter what the season may be.

Great job! Even though I made a lot of edits, I understood what you were saying. Keep up the great work!

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