Guys, does this sound natural? :)
It's the weekend but I'm cooped up inside the house because we're advised to stay home as the confirmed cases of COVID-19 began to rise again. I miss the outside world.......... I'm running out of things to do indoors. I would kill for a cold drink at Starbucks right now. It's kind of sad to be restricted from doing such things which were taken for granted in the past. I really hope we can go back to normalcy very soon.
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Guys, does this sound natural? :)
It's the weekend but I'm cooped up inside the house because we're we have been/we were advised to stay home as the confirmed cases of COVID-19 began has begun to rise again. I miss the outside world.......... I'm running out of things to do indoors. I would kill for a cold drink at from Starbucks right now. It's kind of sad to be restricted from doing such things which were taken for granted in the past. I really hope we can go back to normalcy/normality very soon.
Jin, it is really well written as it... I have made some verb tense suggestions that are optional.
Americans use normalcy but other English speakers will use normality more frequently.
Yes, being cooped up inside (especially in summer) has become a bore! In Canada, people are swarming the natural environments (parks, mountains, beaches)... just to escape their homes. Bikes, boats and camping equipment are sold out in the stores as people search for ways to simply spend time pleasurably and safely.
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Great work! Sounds very natural. :)
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Thank you, Alyssa!! :):)
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No errors I can see personally. Flows really well! Awesome job :)
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