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Hot summer Actually, I really love hot summers, but I‘m also a little bit scared, in relation to the nature. What I mean is the effect of the heatness on the wild animals and plants. On a really hot day, I can easily change my cloths, drink a lot of wather, stay in the shade or cool me down with an air conditioner. But, how can plants and wild animals do this? They have to take what they get, independently of what they would need. Well, this is nature and wild animals as well as plants are more robust than we are, but they often suffer also from the heat and the dryness, mainly caused by the climate change. While I‘m writing this lines, I‘m sitting outside in the shape of my lovely garden, zipping on my refreshing drink and listening to the little water fountain of my biotope. Hot summer days are so nice, I really love this kind of holiday feeling. But I wish, that it’s going to rain tonight ;-).

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Hot summer

I really love hot summers, but I‘m also a little bit scared of its impact on the environment. What I mean is the effect of high temeratures on wild animals and plants. On a really hot day, I can easily change my clothes, drink a lot of water, stay in the shade or cool myself down with an air conditioner. But, how can plants and wild animals do this? They have to take what they get, independently of what they would need. Wild animals and plants are more robust than we are, but they often suffer from the heat and dryness, mainly caused by the climate change. While I‘m writing this, I‘m sitting outside in the shade of my lovely garden, sipping on my refreshing drink and listening to the little water fountain of my biotope. Hot summer days are so nice, I really love this kind of feeling. But I wish that it would rain tonight.

Notes:

The word "actually" is normally used to start a sentence normally when you want to clarify something or correct a misunderstanding by someone else. Since you are not doing that here, I omitted the word.

I searched for the word "heatness" in the dictionary, but I could not find it. I don't it is a word.

I left out "the" in front of "wild animals" because it seems that you are talking about wild animals in a general sense and, if so, you would not include the definite article

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