The Trip
Last weekend I and my friends decided to went cycling trip in distance about 40 mils (60 kilometrs). I think that we road 40 mils in 5 hours, but we moved too slowly and often did stopping. Also we often rode in wrong direction, because we didn’t knew the right way and always used mobile phone was very uncomfortable. Eventually we had rode only about 20 miles in 7 hours of trip and couldn’t rode further, because it got dark and we didn’t see the road. We decided next time go on a trip only in morning and move faster.
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The Trip
Last weekend I and my friends and I decided to went go on a cycling trip, in a distance of about 40 miles (60 kilometres). I think that we road rode 40 miles in 5 hours, but we moved too slowly stopping often /and often did stopped. Also we often rode in the wrong direction, because we didn’t know the right way and always used mobile phone which was very uncomfortable. Eventually we had rode /we had ridden only about 20 miles in 7 hours of the trip and couldn’t ride further, because it got dark and we didn’t /couldn't see the road. We decided next time to go on a trip only in the morning and to move faster.
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The Trip
Last weekend I and my friends decided to went go on a cycling trip in for a distance of about 40 miles (60 kilometers). I think that we road rode 40 miles in 5 hours, but we moved too slowly and often did stopping stopped. Also we often rode in the wrong direction, because we didn’t knew know the right way and always used mobile phone was very uncomfortable (see Note 1). Eventually we had rode only about 20 miles in 7 hours of trip and couldn’t rode ride any further, because it got dark and we didn’t couldn't see the road. We decided that next time we go on a trip, only we'll leave in the morning and move faster.
Note 1. I'm not sure of your intended meaning here. Maybe you meant to say ".. and the mobile phone we were using (for navigation) didn't work well" ?
Hope this helps.
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