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Introduction about myself My name is Janet, I am from Taiwan. I have a Master's degree in science from the College of Information and Electrical Engineering and a graduate certificate in strategic relationship marketing. I am a marketing professional focusing mainly on business development and marketing strategy development for high-tech B2B companies. My expertise include marketing research and analysis, project and product management as well as marketing communication. What I found interesting about Marketing is that it is very dynamic and has no right or wrong answers. There are always something new, so I have to be open-minded, creative and never stop learning. Some fun factors about me, I am a mother of two kids, one is 5 and another one is 9. I love spending time with them and actually learn some skills from getting alone with them like negotiation and conflict solving skills. Other than that, I like traveling to experience different cultures, dancing, listening to music and watching movies for fun. My favorite sport is badminton. I have been playing badminton for over 20 years, and I still love it. Lately, I also find myself quite fascinated about the Human Design system. In short, I am a friendly and open-minded person, enjoy meeting people and discovering new stuff. I am very excited about taking this MBA program and can't wait to start the journey. Thank you.

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My name is Janet and I am from Taiwan.
I have a master’s degree in science from the College of Information and Electrical Engineering and a graduate certificate in strategic relationship marketing. I am a marketing professional focusing mainly on business development and marketing strategy development for high-tech B2B companies. My expertise includes marketing research and analysis, project and product management as well as marketing communication. What I found interesting about marketing is that it is very dynamic and has no right or wrong answers. There is always something new, so I have to (or “…so I must”) be open-minded, creative and never stop learning.
Some fun factors about me are that I am a mother of two kids, one is 5 and the other one is 9. I love spending time with them and actually learning some skills from being alone with them like negotiation and conflict solving. Other than that, I like traveling to experience different cultures, dancing, listening to music and watching movies for fun. My favorite sport is badminton. I have been playing badminton for over 20 years, and I still love it. Lately, I also find myself quite fascinated about the Human Design system.
In short, I am a friendly and open-minded person, enjoy meeting (new) people and discovering new stuff. I am very excited about taking this MBA program and can't wait to start the journey. Thank you.

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Introduction about myself -> About me/Let me introduce myself

My name is Janet, I am from Taiwan.

I have a Master's degree in science from the College of Information and Electrical Engineering and a graduate certificate in strategic relationship marketing.
The names of the major/specialization course should be capitalized at the start of each syllable (Science, Strategic Relationship Marketing).
I am a marketing professional focusing mainly on business development and marketing strategy development for high-tech B2B companies. My expertise includes marketing research and analysis, project and product management as well as marketing communication. What I found (-> find) interesting about Marketing (no caps) is that it is very dynamic and has no right or wrong answers. There are always something new, so I have to be open-minded, creative and never stop learning (-> to never stop learning).

Some fun factors (you mean "facts about myself"?)about me, I am a mother of two kids, one is 5 and another one is 9 (-> one is 5 and another 9). I love spending time with them and actually learn some skills from getting alone with them (learn something from them?) like negotiation and conflict solving skills. Other than that, I like traveling (travelling) to experience different cultures, (I also love) dancing, listening to music and watching movies for fun. My favorite sport is badminton. I have been playing badminton for over 20 years, and I still love it. Lately, I also find myself quite fascinated about the Human Design system.

In short, I am a friendly and open-minded person, (I) enjoy meeting people and discovering new stuff. I am very excited about taking this MBA program and can't wait to start the journey. Thank you.
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