Could you please correct the following one?
When you start to change by own, the world that surrounds you look entirely different.
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Could you please correct the following one?
When you start to change by on your own, the world that surrounds around you looks entirely different.
When you change, the world looks entirely different. (same meaning, less wordy)
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I agree with Michael, you could also say "When you start to change yourself..."
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I wonder if you mean ; "When you start to change your inner self, the world that surrounds you looks entirely different."
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