Could you please check my sentences? Could I improve them somehow?
1. The access to my computer was denied because I put a wrong password.
2. There was a long conversation between my father and mother.
3. My brother trying to get to the next stage in his game.
4. My progress is more than exceptional.
5. His appearance wasn't a surprise.
6. My brother accidentally dropped his food on the floor.
7. I went to the library with my friend.
8. I've to do the research about dogs for my school homework.
9. He didn't eat meat since he became a vegetarian.
10. I hope she'll achieve success in her exam.
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Could you please check my sentences? Could I improve them somehow?
1. The access to my computer was denied because I entered a wrong password.
2. There was a long conversation between my father and mother. (This one is grammatically fine; it's vague but maybe that's intentional?)
3. My brother is trying to get to the next stage in his game.
4. My progress is more than exceptional.
5. His appearance wasn't a surprise.
6. My brother accidentally dropped his food on the floor.
7. I went to the library with my friend.
8. I've had to do the research about dogs for my school homework. ("I have had to..." to me suggests some other level to the sentence, like "I've had to do this because my report on cats got a bad grade." You could instead say "I had to do research..." To me "the" feels optional)
9. He hasn't eaten meat since he became a vegetarian.
10. I hope she'll do well on her exam.
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Just one disagreement:
1. The Access to my computer was denied because I put in [entered] a wrong password.
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