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"YOUR NAME" - The red thread connect with time, space, and love. Mitsuha is a girl who lives in a remote village belong to a small town where around by forest, she grew up with a grandmother and young sister, in a family that inherits the traditional Shinto shrine ritual. After her mother died, her father does not accept to inherits this traditional, he decided to become a politician. Like another person, she day by day felt bore with this place where is quiet, have not a coffee shop, book store, 2 hour per train, the grocery store closed at 21 pm. She wished to become a boy living in Tokyo next life. Do not wait for the next life! Because of the miracle happened. One day, Mitsuha woke up in a body boy whose name is Taki living in Tokyo – a dynamic person, gentle, and cute with a busy life from study to a part-time job. Day by day, the strange dreams do both Taki and Mitsuha little by little realize that it was not just normally a dream, they actually were exchanged body when they were sleeping. They were from a surprise to adapt and help themselves to get a nice life when in both bodies. To avoid the troubles, they noted messages, regulations, and even funny joke games. These created many new colors for their boredom life. Two strange persons do not common point but like as a parallel webbing knit together that create miracle magic. And passed those days, they step by step realized that their mind always towards the opposite person who they never meet. When the heart decided to speak, it was also when the two realized the ambiguous existence of the opposite person. The appearance of the comet in the Japan sky, a view imagined extreme beautiful like a dream, blown to the strange dreams and opened a truth awfully. The motif exchange to the body does not strange with the drama of the world. However, “Your name” - Shinkai Mokoto movie director which was skillful insert the value culture and the story about the love magic.

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Mitsuha is a girl who lives in a remote village near a small town surrounded by forest.  She grew up with her grandmother and young sister, in a family that follows the traditional Shinto shrine rituals. After her mother died, her father no longer wished to follow this traditional and decided to become a politician instead. Like any another person, she often feels bored in her quiet village, without a coffee shop or book store, where the grocery store closes at 21.00 and the nearest city is 2 hours away by train. She wishes to become a boy living in Tokyo in her next life but she does not have to wait that long, because a miracle happens.

One day, Mitsuha wakes up in the body of a boy whose name is Taki. Living in Tokyo, he is a dynamic person, gentle, and cute with a busy life from studing to a part-time job. Taki and Mitsuha little by little realize that they are not dreaming; they actually are exchanging bodies while they sleep. Though surprised at first, they adapt and help themselves to live a nice life when in both bodies. To avoid issues, they write each other messages, rules, and even funny joke games. These adventures lighten up their dull lives. Two strangers with nothing in common are joined by a miracle.

As time goes on, they slowly realize that that they are always thinking of this other person who they have never met. When the heart decided to speak, it was also when the two realized the ambiguous existence of the opposite person. The appearance of the comet in the Japan sky, a view imagined extreme beautiful like a dream, blown to the strange dreams and opened a truth awfully. [These sentences are unclear, I'm not sure what you wanted to say]

The appearance of a comet in the Japanese sky brings to a head their strange dreams and reveals an awful truth. The body-switch motif does not distract from the drama of the world. “Your name” by Shinkai Mokoto, is a skillful work of cultural value about the magic of love.

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........................................................ Day by day, both Taki and Mitsuha had strange dreams, they started to realize little by little, that it was not just a normall dream. They actually ̶switched bodies, while they were sleeping. They were surprised with the body exchange or were surprised with such transformation. To avoid troubles, they made notes, regulations, and even funny joke games. These created many new colors in their boring life. Two strange people(not persons), who do not have common points, but as a parallel webbing knit them together, appeared a miracle. A few days later, step by step, they realized that their mind(I think there should be a verb) "turned"(or another verb) towards the opposite person, whom they have never met.
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I will leave the correcting part to all professional teachers out there. I like the anime. What happened to Kyoto Anime Studio is absolutely heartbreaking. Try: Silence Voice. You might like it. Cheers.

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