Correct my mistakes please.
Today I'm going to talk about the concepts of a tress pass, negligence and rash driving of a masses. Negligence means, do not care about, or intentionally doing any wrong, carelessnes in doing any action. Tress pass means, enter into any of residents, house, in any platform without the consent of owner of the house, it is governed by the tort law, now a days This law is not applicable in all over the world.
And the last one concept is "Rash driving". Today's generation is careless, doing adventures with their lives, do not think about their families, relatives, and their loved ones. Rash driving is common .Doing the same, because they have to reach their job places at proper time,
and have to run their business, jobes without being late. Because of traffic ,our transport system is being distrubed. The peoples are having to face problems, They are not being restricted from rash driving.Traffic rules are not being followed properly. They can be restricted from doing the same by applying proper rules and regulations by the government. Government should let them impose strict orders for not doing the same. Thereby traffice rules and rash driving can be cotrolled.
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I'm going to go into a few of the mistakes that I see:
1. Spelling errors: "Tress pass" should be "trespass," "carelessnes" should be "carelessness," "jobes" should be "jobs," "traffice" should be "traffic," "distrubed" should be "disturbed," etc.
2. The sentences that begin with "[Word] means" should be written as "[Word] means __to__":
ex: "Trespass means __to__ enter into the homes of residents without the consent of __the__ owner."
3. "Now a days" is one word: nowadays
4. "Are having to" - this is not a phrase that is commonly used in English. It is technically correct, but does not sound like a native speaker because it is faster/easier to say "The people __are facing__ problems" or "The people _face_ problems."
5. In general, when you have several points in one sentence, the verb tenses should match.
Hope this helps!
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