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A Movie The rich family cut their trip because the weather had become worse. The mother rushed to pick up the telephone, and she was surprised when she had heard the voice of the rich woman asking her to prepare a meal for her child. Meanwhile, the war in the basement had not been finished yet. The former maid bled a lot after she had been severely hit by the father when she was trying to go upstairs. The maid's husband lost his mind and started crying hysterically after he had seen his wife lying dead on the floor.The rich family was planning to have a party for their child to cheer him up after the bad trip. Meanwhile, the members of the poor family hid in some vacant rooms apart from the father who managed to escape out of the house. The father showed up again to the rich family and offered his help about organizing the party. The mother hid her anxiety and acted like nothing had happened. The guests started to attend the party carrying their gifts. To be continued!

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The rich family cut their trip short because the weather had become worse. The mother rushed to pick up the telephone, and she was surprised when she had heard the voice of the rich woman asking her to prepare a meal for her child. Meanwhile, the war in the basement had not been finished yet. The former maid bled a lot after she had been severely hit This phrase sounds odd - I'd use the word beaten instead by the father when she was trying to go upstairs. The maid's husband lost his mind and started crying hysterically after he had seen saw his wife lying dead on the floor.The rich family was planning to have a party for their child to cheer him up after the bad trip. Meanwhile, the members of the poor family hid in some vacant rooms apart from the father ,who managed to escape out of the house. The father showed up again to presented himself to the rich family and offered his help about with organizing the party. The mother hid her anxiety and acted like nothing had happened. The guests started to attend the party carrying their gifts.

To be continued!

A great summary of a great movie :) Just a couple of phrases that weren't quite right for the context, but otherwise very accurate. Well done!

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