An inattentive driver
Joe was speeding, and was talking on the phone.Suddenly, a cat emerged on the road, and he lost control, and he could not stop the car, so he hit a tree. He blamed the cat because it ran in front of the car. But we know he wasn't paying attention to the road while he was driving. Fortunately, no one was hurt, but his inattentive driving damaged to the car.
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An inattentive driver
Joe was speeding, and was talking on the phone. Suddenly, a cat emerged on the road, and he lost control,. and He could not stop the car, so he hit a tree. He blamed the cat because it ran in front of the car. But we know he wasn't paying attention to the road while he was driving. Fortunately, no one was hurt, but his inattentive driving damaged to the car. (or you could say, but his inattentive driving caused damage to the car.)
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An Inattentive Driver
Joe was speeding, and was talking on the phone. Suddenly, a cat appeared on the road, and he lost control, and he couldn't stop the car. So, he hit a tree. He blamed the cat because it ran in front of the car, but we know he wasn't paying attention to the road while he was driving. Fortunately, no one was hurt, but his inattentive driving damaged to the car.
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