August 10, 2020
This is the 15th day of my 30-days challenge.
I has been a while to update my note....
This weekend, I visited Sequoia National park and watched the biggest sequoia tree in the US.
It was cool but the most fun I had in the park is hiking around Crescent Meadow.
Today I want to writing about what the pros and cons are to live in the US in my point of view.
Pros
1: The country is so diverse. I saw a lot of people who come from different countries with different backgrounds and were of different races. It’s easy to get an opportunity to exchange cultures and I like it because I can notice that it's a normal thing that people have different perspectives.
2: The country is so huge and it has all kinds of different environments such as deserts, beaches, forests, mountains and so on. You can go on a trip forever without having a passport. I’ve been to several national parks this year and it always blew my mind because the nature is breathtaking.
3: People are nice and polite most of the time and they like making conversations. Surprisingly, I don’t feel awkward at all when I talk to strangers. Actually, I started liking making small talk because I think most Americans are friendly and charming.
4: The amount and variety of food. There are many kinds of restaurants in the US and you can experience the real taste of cuisine thanks to diversity. When I went into a grocery store, I was shocked because the store sold so many kinds of things. I thought I was able to buy anything that I wanted here.
Cons
1: Public transportation is not reliable. They often do not show up on time and there are a few number of buses per hour. If you do not have a car, it might be tough to go wherever you want.
2: American city centers are full of homeless, drug addicts. I don’t feel safe when I walk through a downtown area. I only know downtown LA but it smells bad and it is really dirty.
3: Health Care will bankrupt you easily. I was surprised how expensive the medical care is in the US.
4: Guns. Actually, I have not had my life threatened by guns since I’ve lived in the US but I’ve read a lot of news about gun related problems in the US. The fact that everyone can have guns means everyone can be a murderer to me. So I always try to be more careful when I go out.
Thank you for reading my note to the end.
I would be grateful if you could read it as an opinion.
Please feel free to leave your comment and correct my error.
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August 10, 2020
This is the 15th day of my 30-day challenge.
I has been a while since I updated my notes....
This weekend, I visited Sequoia National park and saw the biggest sequoia tree in the US.
It was cool, but the most fun I had in the park was hiking around Crescent Meadow.
Today I want to write about what the pros and cons of living in the US are (in my point of view).
Pros
1: The country is so diverse. I saw a lot of people who come from different countries with different backgrounds and were of different races. It’s easy to get an opportunity to exchange cultures and I like it, because I can easily see that it's a normal thing for people to have different perspectives.
2: The country is so huge and it has all kinds of different environments such as deserts, beaches, forests, mountains, and so on. You can go on a trip forever without having a passport. I’ve been to several national parks this year and it always blew my mind because the nature is breathtaking.
3: People are nice and polite most of the time, and they like making conversations. Surprisingly, I don’t feel awkward at all when I talk to strangers. Actually, I started to like making small talk because I think most Americans are friendly and charming.
4: The amount and variety of food. There are many kinds of restaurants in the US and you can experience the real taste of cuisine thanks to diversity. When I went into a grocery store, I was shocked because the store sold so many kinds of things. It seemed like I could buy anything that I wanted there.
Cons
1: Public transportation is not reliable. They often do not show up on time and there are a small number of buses per hour. If you do not have a car, it might be tough to go wherever you want.
2: American city centers are full of homeless people and drug addicts. I don’t feel safe when I walk through a downtown area. I only know downtown LA but it smells bad and it is really dirty.
3: Health Care will bankrupt you easily. I was surprised how expensive the medical care is in the US.
4: Guns. Actually, I have not had my life threatened by guns since I’ve lived in the US but I’ve read a lot of news about gun related problems in the US. The fact that everyone can have guns means everyone can be a murderer to me. So I always try to be more careful when I go out.
Thank you for reading my note to the end.
I would be grateful if you could read it as an opinion.
Please feel free to leave your comments and correct my errors.
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