Hi, I'm Javier. Apart from correcting it, I would like to know if this writing reaches the B2 level.
I write this letter for complaint about the English course in New Zealand.I am very disappointed and I believe I have wasted my money.
I have so many reasons for write this letter, as several points of advertisement are not true. First, during three weeks I was with other 20 students in the same class, although classes shouldn’t have more than 14 students. Second, in my class there were students from different levels and the teacher hasn’t any specific methodology. Third, the library only opened 4 days during my stance and anyone had wi-fi, in spite of the advertisement’s promises. Finally, the family was composed by local members, who don’t take any care of us and they spoke constantly in their native language, although we were in front of them.
As far as I am concerned, I have been cheated and your advertisement contains misleading advertising.I am going to take legal measures for report the shop. Nevertheless, if you pay me back, I won’t pursue legal actions.
Regards, John.
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Corrections below. I would say you were B1/B2 borderline. :) Also, I haven't corrected it, but you have started off with 'Hi, I'm Javier, and finished with 'John'" You may wish to re-think that if it is a real letter.
Hi, I'm Javier. Apart from correcting it, I would like to know if this writing reaches the B2 level.
I write this letter in complaint about the English course in New Zealand. I am very disappointed and I believe I have wasted my money.
I have so many reasons to write this letter, as several points of advertisement are not true.
First, during the three weeks I was with other 20 students in the same class, although classes should not have had more than 14 students.
Second, in my class there were students at different levels and the teacher had not any specific methodology.
Third, the library only opened 4 days during my stay. Anyone who had wi-fi [could access it?], in spite of the advertisement’s promises.
Finally, the family was composed by local members, who did not take any care of us and they spoke constantly in their native language, although we [were in front of them.] - I don't know what you mean here.
As far as I am concerned, I have been cheated and your advertisement contains misleading advertising.I am going to take legal measures to report the shop [business?]. If, however, you pay me back, I won’t pursue legal actions.
Regards, John.
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